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Lame Plot?
16 years ago
I have been working on this plot to my novel for almost 2 yrs now. Though I have not gotten far at it at all... currently only 17 pages, I am hating the plot.
I am stuck. I don't know what to do with this plot. Thankfully I haven't really gotten into it yet so I can still change it if I can think of something better.... Here is the plot....
Sharla is a Necro-witch who also just happens to be a were-wolf and a Hunter, who lost her family at the age of 3. She is the only survivor, along with an infant sister who was taken by those who had brutally killed her family and nearly killed her. They think her sister is the Prophecy child, and intend to sacrifice her at the age of 21. Sharla was taken in by the Lady of the Woods and raised to be a Necro-Witch. The Lady of the Woods and her mother did the best they could in helping her with her transition into a werewolf.
The killers had thought her dead but they didn't realize that she would live and turn into a wolf at so young a age. They also didn't realize that she was the Prophecy child and that their time had passed for the prophecy fulfillment.
Sharla has been searching for her sister for as long as she can remember and she has finally tracked her down at a convention. While at this convention Sharla runs into Raven Crowsfoot, one of the best Hunters in North America. A romance builds between them as they hunt for Lacey, Sharla's sister.
My biggest problem is I don't know what the prophecy is. I can't work the kinks out and I have been trying for way to long. I just find myself not overly happy with this plot line. If anyone could give ideas on what the prophecy could be about, or another idea entirely I would love you forever.
I run this plot through my head nearly constantly. I want to do this novel, but it just seems lame, plot wise. I already love my two main characters, even though I Haven't gone into depth with them yet, I know how I will do so and hopefully make them loved by everyone who reads them as well.
Thank you guys in advance.
I am stuck. I don't know what to do with this plot. Thankfully I haven't really gotten into it yet so I can still change it if I can think of something better.... Here is the plot....
Sharla is a Necro-witch who also just happens to be a were-wolf and a Hunter, who lost her family at the age of 3. She is the only survivor, along with an infant sister who was taken by those who had brutally killed her family and nearly killed her. They think her sister is the Prophecy child, and intend to sacrifice her at the age of 21. Sharla was taken in by the Lady of the Woods and raised to be a Necro-Witch. The Lady of the Woods and her mother did the best they could in helping her with her transition into a werewolf.
The killers had thought her dead but they didn't realize that she would live and turn into a wolf at so young a age. They also didn't realize that she was the Prophecy child and that their time had passed for the prophecy fulfillment.
Sharla has been searching for her sister for as long as she can remember and she has finally tracked her down at a convention. While at this convention Sharla runs into Raven Crowsfoot, one of the best Hunters in North America. A romance builds between them as they hunt for Lacey, Sharla's sister.
My biggest problem is I don't know what the prophecy is. I can't work the kinks out and I have been trying for way to long. I just find myself not overly happy with this plot line. If anyone could give ideas on what the prophecy could be about, or another idea entirely I would love you forever.
I run this plot through my head nearly constantly. I want to do this novel, but it just seems lame, plot wise. I already love my two main characters, even though I Haven't gone into depth with them yet, I know how I will do so and hopefully make them loved by everyone who reads them as well.
Thank you guys in advance.
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