Greetings,

Awesome! What a wonderful way to think about this prompt! I enjoyed the characters and I loved the conversations! Thanks for sharing!

Koronis

welcome welcome welcome..... and now (drum role) your prompt as well?

*gives him a hug...

V.

*Scratches head...* Uhh...

*pops him one.....

set the timer... pose yourself in front of the keyboard - and do it!

it's not the story where youo make it... it's in the editing....

V.

Oh, the insanity!

*gives him a good chuckle... eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

V.

Funny story...*Homer voicer* Funny... */Homer voice*

I wuvs it vixy keep up the good work!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much hun... I shall try hun...

V.

haha, wowwww.... i dont even know what to say to that. but whatever works for them, i guess? bovines = silleh :3

*smiles... thank you so much ... and yes bovines; a stout breed...

V.

Brilliant. <smirk>
Made me laugh the entire way through it. How do you come up with these?
<nuzzle>

*smiles back sweetly.... I just knew you would like this one. I must admit... I liked the bunch of them.

*gives him a hug....

V.

The charaters where very comical in tihs one, good work.

Thank ya Birdie... hugsssss.....

V.

Uh oh... hee hee. Well, guess he gets to be the king, the new kid... so long as they think it's the King's. Or say so, anyway..

*smiles... how's things out in California hun? Less hectic now?

*gives him a hug....

V.

More. For different reasons.

yucko... mine too... all work related stress... midnights stinks and work politics stinks even worse...

V.

"That, my fine fellow, fills your feed trough.”

An excellent line.

*smiles brightly.... ty ty ty

V.

Face down, ass up, that's the way we like to f...wait.

;) Doing a little catchup.

The phrase "Moo Colonel" makes me think of the COWBOYS of Moo Mesa. Did you ever see that show?

What captures me about this piece, aside from the little touches that tell us about Buford (like his fondling of his horns at the opening) is the true tavern spirit, and how this guy can turn their mood with just a few words. I really got the feeling like everyone here knew each other and, whether they like each other or not, they can at least get together at the tavern for a few drinks, a few laughs, and a good time with the news of the new heir. Great setting in this, I'd like to see more from this world. ;D

*gives him a big hug... thanks TW.... thanks so much...

V.

I'm there for ya, kiddo. ^v^

Not a milk dud!--An udder success, and that's no bull!

*thinks about popping him a good one - but she's laughing too hard.

*gives him a hug instead....

V.

I do not know how you do it every week. I am glad you do. These cows could be Marines.

*smiles so big... that's the beauty of the Prompt. It seems my forte is the smaller stories. I just sink my head in and run with it.

I'm very glad you are glad.

V.

Taken to channeling Metasuss? I could almost see Brontes waving a tankard with the rest of them.

Loved it.

*laughs and gives the Cat a hug... I will admit that when I wrote this I figured Metassus would get a kick out of it... no pun intended...

V.

Someone asked me the other day (when I shared Courage with a writer friend who isn't familiar with FA) "Why animals?" when I could just as easily write "human" characters. I told him one of the reasons is the Jester's Honesty. You can put a mask on and say truths that would otherwise get you hanged . . . .

This seems a wonderful story with very friendly characters who put in bold language the reasons for war that so many of us suspect, or as the Grandmother in Pippin says "Men and their wars . . . sometimes I think they raise flags when they can't get anything else up."

Oh I so love that quote. Thank you for this hun... it made me smile upon waking this day.

Big hugs...

V.

I enjoyed this! The rowdy characters reminded me of this one race of somewhat barbaric and straightforward people inhabiting an old country in my fantasy world.

oooooo.... I like that thought....

V.

Good story, but I'm confused as to what it all meeeaaans. xD

*laughs.... the prompt was 'breaking news' - I took it back to when the Town Cryer was the news bringer... it was then aluded that he was actually the sire of the Queens new son.

V.

Well that much I got, I was just wondering if there was anymore to the story. Also what, "Belly's up, bum's down", means.

*laughs... I made that one up...

this is a Thursday Prompt - everyone in the group uses the same prompt, which this time was 'breaking news'. Each of us then writes a story to it... the time limit (not really a limit but a guide line) is 15 minutes to do the story and as much time as you want to edit. In this case, this is what came to me.

V.

Oooh, ok, so it was like a sorta contest thing in a way. I get it now. Well very cool. Better than anything I could scrounge up in 15 minutes.

not a contest at all but sort of... it's writing practice and we (as a group) critique each other. It's a lot of fun to see how everyone's minds work.

Oh, ok, well that explains it. Very interesting idea.

you're welcome to join us if you wish....

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/723637/

just go there....


V.

Pffft, last I checked I wasn't much of a writer. I'd have to practice to get back into it I think, and I'm not much for practicing anything. xD

ooookkkkkkk... well if you see anything pop up that says 'Thursday Prompt' that's us.

V.

Quite funny. Interesting concepts, interesting characters, and your use of words is a real treat in this one. The aftertaste is very humorous. Great little story.

*smiles so big.... OK... time for morning coffee and part 2.

*hugs...

V.

well writ m'friend, well writ indeed

*laughs and gives her a hug...

V.