Wow, such flow and smooth, quick versing.
Kind of like a story in a couple lines. I love your rhyming scheme, did you come up with it yourself?


I don't feel worthy to try any more poetry ;~;

*Perks his ears* Oh! Well, thank you kindly, mate! ^^ I like quick most of the time- anything that drags on for too long tends to get ignored, as people get bored too easily. *Winks* Most of my poetry is in my scraps, though... which is where this is headed tomorrow evening. *Snickerwoofs*

And the rhyming scheme? I... suppose I came up with it? *Muses* That is, I didn't use any specific form or example. I just.. .wrote it. ^^

Aww, that's no way to feel! *noses* Where would anyone be if we all gave up, mm?

Ah, I know what you mean. Both sides of the fence, too x.x

And, I'll be sure to keep an eye on them..!

As far as your scheme, it tends to follow:

Rhyme 1
Rhyme 1
Free
Rhyme 3
Free
Rhyme 2
Rhyme 2
Rhyme 3

Or something like that..~

Oh, yes, quite... some tend to disregard a work if it's too short, as they fancy it lacks merit or somesuch....

Ah! *Ears perk* That sort of scheme... I think perhaps you added a line in, though? I figure it to be:

Rhyme 1
Rhyme 1
Free
Rhyme 2
Rhyme 3
Rhyme 3
Free
Rhyme 2

Though I'm hardly any expert on the idea... *Chuckles softly* And I do thank you, all the same, for your kind words. ^^

Well, you kinda switch between the two x3

No worries... ^^ Even I don't know what I'm doing half the time! *Wags absently at that*

I know one thing:
if a woman saw this, that you gave to read, she'll stalk you til you say "yes".
XD

*Muses with an absent grin* Well, as delightful an idea as that is, I fear it's easier said than done. *Smirks* Women are hardly that easy to impress....

But thank you, all the same, for the delightful insight. *Wags his tail happily* ^^

Tragically beautiful love. *purrwoofs* ^^

*Ears fall back sheepishly* Thank you, sir. ^^