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Well, this certainly took forever. I'll try my best to keep up a decent pace from here on down the line.
In this part we have our hapless lion wake up, be given more freedom than he can be trusted with, and then begin to suffer the consequences.
I've also decided that the I'm not going to be editing these parts any more than a quick proof-reading, and that I will edit and re-release a complied and revised edition once I'm finished. Please leave any comments, questions, critiques or suggestions in the comment section below! I read and enjoy every response~
Also, it has come to my attention that this story might not be quite tame enough for the general audience tag, do you think there are grounds for this objection? And that I might add a mature warning in future? Tell me what you all think.
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In this part we have our hapless lion wake up, be given more freedom than he can be trusted with, and then begin to suffer the consequences.
I've also decided that the I'm not going to be editing these parts any more than a quick proof-reading, and that I will edit and re-release a complied and revised edition once I'm finished. Please leave any comments, questions, critiques or suggestions in the comment section below! I read and enjoy every response~
Also, it has come to my attention that this story might not be quite tame enough for the general audience tag, do you think there are grounds for this objection? And that I might add a mature warning in future? Tell me what you all think.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Lion
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 57 kB
I don't think anything in the story makes it higher than general for FA rating standards, honestly. You've got pg-13 material at best, 13 being the lowest age allowed to legally view FA.
From what I can remember of the "questionable" parts, you've got a kidnapping, forced eating/situations, and diaper usage, with no "adult" level of description. It's nothing a typical teenager wouldn't already be familiar with from t.v., internet, elsewhere, or themselves, anyways. XD
So I say current chapters could remain general. If you have further chapters which are not so general, then marking the rating up on just those is fine, I'm sure.
Anyway, the scene where you revealed that he wet himself in his sleep got me giddy. ^^ Further babyfication!
Loved it; waiting on the next part. :3
P.S.
Images of a crinkle pants with shorts not coming up high enough and a shirt not going down low enough to cover the top of the diaper are adorable; good on ya for describing that. ^^
From what I can remember of the "questionable" parts, you've got a kidnapping, forced eating/situations, and diaper usage, with no "adult" level of description. It's nothing a typical teenager wouldn't already be familiar with from t.v., internet, elsewhere, or themselves, anyways. XD
So I say current chapters could remain general. If you have further chapters which are not so general, then marking the rating up on just those is fine, I'm sure.
Anyway, the scene where you revealed that he wet himself in his sleep got me giddy. ^^ Further babyfication!
Loved it; waiting on the next part. :3
P.S.
Images of a crinkle pants with shorts not coming up high enough and a shirt not going down low enough to cover the top of the diaper are adorable; good on ya for describing that. ^^
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