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Category Poetry / All
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Life is something we love and despise in the same breath. Sometimes it's hard for me to decide how I feel about it.
I like the first and third stanzas, the third one for the message it conveys. The last stanza feels like it wants to say something and keep going, but then it ends - maybe the last line is looking for something to depend on? Just my two bits.
Nice work. c:
I like the first and third stanzas, the third one for the message it conveys. The last stanza feels like it wants to say something and keep going, but then it ends - maybe the last line is looking for something to depend on? Just my two bits.
Nice work. c:
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