Used to have this up as 'My Damage'. Took it down, thought it was a bit too emo. I showed it to my good friend
SherbertFox who asked me not to toss it and let her rework it, instead.
We spent about two hours working together on this new poem/song. I think it's most definitely a lot better than it was and think it's worth posting, now. Thanks, Sherbert <3
SherbertFox who asked me not to toss it and let her rework it, instead. We spent about two hours working together on this new poem/song. I think it's most definitely a lot better than it was and think it's worth posting, now. Thanks, Sherbert <3
Category Poetry / All
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Size 72 x 120px
File Size 1.6 kB
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I could see this as one of those late seventies/early eighties epic ballads written by Jim Steinman, such as "Two out of three ain't bad", "Total eclipse of the heart" or "Holding out for a hero".
All you need is Meat Loaf and Ellen Foley doing a really sweaty performance of it, or Bonnie Tyler in her '100 fags a day' rasp. :P
All you need is Meat Loaf and Ellen Foley doing a really sweaty performance of it, or Bonnie Tyler in her '100 fags a day' rasp. :P
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