
This is the first chapter of possibly a longer story, if people respond to it. Positive or negative, do comment if you read, I like to hear your thoughts.
Sort of a side project for me, but I wanted to get something out there.
A guy driving out late one night thinks he sees something. An anthro, bleeding, hurting, and needing help. What does he do? What would you do?
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Sort of a side project for me, but I wanted to get something out there.
A guy driving out late one night thinks he sees something. An anthro, bleeding, hurting, and needing help. What does he do? What would you do?
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Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Koala
Size 73 x 120px
File Size 20.8 kB
I agree with Ukyo, the koala was a nice choice, different. I enjoyed the chapter and read it twice.
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I like how you had her shifting between human and anthro, and the fact that her weight, texture, ect is effected by the near instantaneous change. Instead of having the human form be an illusion for instance. The only thing that felt off was the conversation with the brother, he felt as if he was just a plot device to further the story, which he kinda is in part I guess. But maybe expand upon the conversation a bit or at some point have the character remember some random event. Otherwise I can certainly feel the main character's PoV coming through and I want to see more!
****Spoiler alert! Spoiler alert! Spoiler alert!****
I like how you had her shifting between human and anthro, and the fact that her weight, texture, ect is effected by the near instantaneous change. Instead of having the human form be an illusion for instance. The only thing that felt off was the conversation with the brother, he felt as if he was just a plot device to further the story, which he kinda is in part I guess. But maybe expand upon the conversation a bit or at some point have the character remember some random event. Otherwise I can certainly feel the main character's PoV coming through and I want to see more!
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