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And we're back in the other world sorry this page took so long. I have been struggling with this page in that i drew it out like 3 times trying to decide how much info I wanted to convey or not, needless to say the next page might have some helpful suggestions to whats going on.
And we're back in the other world sorry this page took so long. I have been struggling with this page in that i drew it out like 3 times trying to decide how much info I wanted to convey or not, needless to say the next page might have some helpful suggestions to whats going on.
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This was a good move on your part, Gem. Instead of focusing on details for the situation, you focused on the emotions of the main character. While information is good for explaining a story a character's emotions, especially the protagonist's, tells the reader/viewer more about what is happening and can sometimes make it believable to where some can (in some cases) relate to the situation. I was a little unsure with the beginning of this story of where you were wanting to take this story, but now that I have gotten to the real climax of it all I wonder how our hero will fare with this new dilemma, Gemma. LOL
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