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Chip has an answer for everything, doesn't he? Guess that's what you'd expect from the confident, flaming chipmunk.
It also seems that our little organization isn't TOTALLY bad.
P.S. - The Thursday Prompts are on a hiatus until after the holidays. That means this is as well. Please be patient and I will get back to it when the prompts resume.
This is a prompt project I hope to actually complete. Essentially, I'll be uploading a story on Wednesday each week to coincide with the current Thursday Prompt done by
duroc. To find the prompts, please visit his page or head on over to the threads on the FWG forums: http://www.anthroaquatic.com/forum/.....php?board=13.0 . Even though this isn't the first time a project like this has been attempted with the prompts, I hope this may inspire others to try their hands with the prompts. They are quite fun!
I hope you enjoy this story! I would appreciate all kinds of feedback, though please keep it civilized.
Chip has an answer for everything, doesn't he? Guess that's what you'd expect from the confident, flaming chipmunk.
It also seems that our little organization isn't TOTALLY bad.
P.S. - The Thursday Prompts are on a hiatus until after the holidays. That means this is as well. Please be patient and I will get back to it when the prompts resume.
This is a prompt project I hope to actually complete. Essentially, I'll be uploading a story on Wednesday each week to coincide with the current Thursday Prompt done by
duroc. To find the prompts, please visit his page or head on over to the threads on the FWG forums: http://www.anthroaquatic.com/forum/.....php?board=13.0 . Even though this isn't the first time a project like this has been attempted with the prompts, I hope this may inspire others to try their hands with the prompts. They are quite fun!I hope you enjoy this story! I would appreciate all kinds of feedback, though please keep it civilized.
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So much dialogue XD It's a lot of telling and no showing, and I'm personally fine with that, but you harp on me about it a lot so I thought I'd say something. I'm also noticing because of how well the Thor movie I just saw handled its planning moments (I do recommend the movie btw). Second, I feel like Chip's hug is a little over the top for his character. But the amount of dialogue is fine because you wrote it well, so nice move there. Can't wait for the next installment :D
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