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***Still deciding if I should post the text here as well. Too lazy to go through and reformat it, but let me know if you prefer to read it off the site instead of having to download it. If so, I will start posting it here.***
Here is the draft of my revamp of my "A Bully Story". I cleaned up a lot of parts to make it more coherent and believable. I'm also trying to keep the chapters around 4k words each (let me know if you think that is too long or short).
Any criticism/opinions you have would be greatly appreciated (even if you think it is horrible, please let me know and why you think that).
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Here is the draft of my revamp of my "A Bully Story". I cleaned up a lot of parts to make it more coherent and believable. I'm also trying to keep the chapters around 4k words each (let me know if you think that is too long or short).
Any criticism/opinions you have would be greatly appreciated (even if you think it is horrible, please let me know and why you think that).
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Category Story / All
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File Size 338.4 kB
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