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Time passes and the four stop off for a lunch break. Turns out they're closer to the cave than Todd thought!
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I spent the better part of yesterday and today working on this, so I hope the wait was worth it. I might touch it up a little later on, but for now I just wanted to release it. Stay tuned. I'll get the next page up when I can.
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I spent the better part of yesterday and today working on this, so I hope the wait was worth it. I might touch it up a little later on, but for now I just wanted to release it. Stay tuned. I'll get the next page up when I can.
Category All / Transformation
Species Pokemon
Size 929 x 1280px
File Size 300.8 kB
Just a slight bit of constructive criticism, at least from my point of view.
I know the joke you were trying to pull off there, the whole 'he is the only one who notices what is going on in the background.' bit.
But that works better if the viewer would be able to see the unevolved pokemon walk into the cave a few panels before the last one.
I know the joke you were trying to pull off there, the whole 'he is the only one who notices what is going on in the background.' bit.
But that works better if the viewer would be able to see the unevolved pokemon walk into the cave a few panels before the last one.
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