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Popular demands that Xin be a bitch have now gotten what they wanted.
Xin, no, don't prod him.
no.
also.
hm, what's this? a 'top' who was once a 'bottom'? What impropriety is this? Before you know it, gay men will start being.... I dunno, PEOPLE, or something.
/end snark
wallflower © salkitten
Popular demands that Xin be a bitch have now gotten what they wanted.
Xin, no, don't prod him.
no.
also.
hm, what's this? a 'top' who was once a 'bottom'? What impropriety is this? Before you know it, gay men will start being.... I dunno, PEOPLE, or something.
/end snark
wallflower © salkitten
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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With Xin I think I like the idea of a good person with a bad mouth. Someone who just doesn't think before they speak and never realizes when they went to far but a loyal friend who deeply cares about those close to him.
That is what I thought you were going for and that is a much better character then a classic popular kid suffering from bitch syndrome. There's still time! Please go with the more complex character. The idea still fits perfectly with the rest of the story
That is what I thought you were going for and that is a much better character then a classic popular kid suffering from bitch syndrome. There's still time! Please go with the more complex character. The idea still fits perfectly with the rest of the story
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/12867543/
doubt you can read it very well at this size but there actually is a lot of character development here. It's just hard to explain and I've kinda given up on making this comic completely canon.
doubt you can read it very well at this size but there actually is a lot of character development here. It's just hard to explain and I've kinda given up on making this comic completely canon.
Maybe a slap into next week will make Xin stop being g a thundercunt. Or next month. Possibly next year, but then you're just screwing with the space-time continuum.
Bottom line: Xin, you need to be smacked. Sorry, love you sweetie, but right now practically belong in Mean Girls.
Bottom line: Xin, you need to be smacked. Sorry, love you sweetie, but right now practically belong in Mean Girls.
So Xin set up his "friend" with a guy while planning to go to a party at said guy's ex's house? He then tries to encourage him to see his ex? I know you're changing Xin as you go, but this is not the behavior of a friend. This is the behavior of the bitchy popular chick who schemes ways to fuck with someone's day. Why would Shawn hang around him? Why would he accept the blind date in the first place when this makes it seem like Xin has a history of doing horrible things to him as Shawn doesn't appear surprised by this? Sorry for the rant but as it appears you really care about character, none of this makes sense. Xin shows moments where he seems to care about Shawn, he appears to want him to go to the party, but this page makes it look like he wants Shawn to go to the party to humiliate him. Also, your comic art is improving. Sorry again for the rant.
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