I like how your poem drifts me towards the pagan cultures that inhabited ancient Europe. The celts, the dacians, the germanics and all those people, as they valued their land, their forests, and nature itself very much.

Your work reeks of chthonic pride. I also like the idea of perfection by nature, or natural perfection. My opinion is that the artificial pursuit with which we wish to adorn our bodies with does nothing but deprave and corrode our essence. Artificial "beauty" is actually repugnant ( in my opinion ). All those plastic surgeries, excessive make up, etc.

And therefore, I like how you bring up the presentation of a creature who is born perfect by nature. He/she is adorned by a natural beauty, a natural perfection which discards a blindfolded pursuit for artificiality.

Perhaps everyone should find that creature who lurks inside of us, who is perfect by nature, eh?

Anyway, this was what I felt on my mind at my first glance. If I am to dive deeper into the entrails you spewed forth by executing that laborious crafting of verbosity you call a poem, I can feel that the perfect creature by nature, is that creature who respects and defends nature the most. Which is... touching and admirable.

The meter you chose seemed... interesting. If not, exotic to say the least. Correct me if I am wrong, but... did you choose a separate meter for every structure in particular? An audacious feat if so, I sometimes dare do so as well, combining different meters and juggling with the fluidity of a poem. Good for expanding the potential of it and transforming the poem into an instrument.
The meter in the first quartet soothed me most, I personally found it most appealing out of all of them. That's a personal opinion though.

That being said, I like your poem.

My commendations.

Thanks for Your criticism.
I wrote this poem from heart (as I always do) to one of my most loved creatures: the unicorn. More particularly, to a close friend of mine, so I infused some elements about him.
The meter, well...it kind of has none, I just wrote down what came to mind, found a rhyme construction that would be nice and is not the usual AABB that I most often use.
I'm glad You like it ^^

Can I ride it into battle?

I'm neutral good.

The unicorn abides no man. And is not a steed for personal use.

What if I give it an apple?

Cmon, we need to save the damsel or some shit!

Well, I don't know what unicorns eat, therefore I don't know if they like apples. But the damsel should save herself! You know the saying: Help Yourself, so God may help You! XD

I'm glad I stuck with this piece through to the end, as it really does deliver the goods.

Well done.

Thank You very much :)