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This was an old poem, a bit tweaked. :)
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 810 B
I like how you said "liquid" in line 4 instead of some more descriptive or concise name, leaving it up to the reader to decide if it's some kind of blood or puss, or if it's water.
I also found the gradient change of mood palatable. It worked much better than a sudden change would have.
Very good! I'm glad my watch was not misplaced :)
I also found the gradient change of mood palatable. It worked much better than a sudden change would have.
Very good! I'm glad my watch was not misplaced :)
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