Com: Kayllik temporarily gets whats coming to him
Category Story / Transformation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 45.2 kB
*squeaks and smiles*
Thanks for taking this commission and doing such a wonderful job with it.
I always love seeing my characters meet a transforming end, and having the tables turn on Corwyn is the perfect fate for him. You beautifully handled the way Kayllik was vulnerable at the beginning, and his frustration and growing anger only helped in building the suspense of what he was going to do when his powers returned.
You also did a wonderful job with having Kayllik temporarily stuck in mid transformation, which worked perfectly in giving Corwyn a reason to laugh, and thus completely infuriate Kayllik into taking his revenge on the raven.
And of course, referencing some other characters within some of the other transformed items, is always a nice touch, as I can definitely see Corwyn as the type to get all of his possessions by transforming random furs, which gives more reason as to why he just happened upon Kayllik when considering who might make a nice beanbag chair. :)
Thanks again, and keep up the great work with all of your stories. <3
Thanks for taking this commission and doing such a wonderful job with it.
I always love seeing my characters meet a transforming end, and having the tables turn on Corwyn is the perfect fate for him. You beautifully handled the way Kayllik was vulnerable at the beginning, and his frustration and growing anger only helped in building the suspense of what he was going to do when his powers returned.
You also did a wonderful job with having Kayllik temporarily stuck in mid transformation, which worked perfectly in giving Corwyn a reason to laugh, and thus completely infuriate Kayllik into taking his revenge on the raven.
And of course, referencing some other characters within some of the other transformed items, is always a nice touch, as I can definitely see Corwyn as the type to get all of his possessions by transforming random furs, which gives more reason as to why he just happened upon Kayllik when considering who might make a nice beanbag chair. :)
Thanks again, and keep up the great work with all of your stories. <3
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prowler7
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