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I got new idea for that art.. Sonic just saving Akai. She has been kidnapped and she is simply scared. I guess it fits more.
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Alright, the anatomy looks better on this one The elbow I think is at belly button height and the legs are almost right. But I know it's your style, so you probably won't really care about that much. But there is one problem... Akai's tail should be a bit lowered on the back, not to much but you know... tiny bit. It's okay though.
The blood looks like it could use a bit more detail to it, maybe adding a dark color to it would be nice, but it still looks nice.
And then Sonic is a bit OOC with the canon Sonic. And by a bit I mean a lot. Is this like... your AU where Sonic acts a bit like this? If so that's totally fine! I have an AU where Sonic is a shy little dork and way OOC from the canon Sonic too. So don't worry, i'm just wanting to know. But Sonic's face does look a bit creepy, even if he is meant to be, he should lower the smile a bit, and keep the lowered eyes.
Hopefully you didn't find this a too harsh. I might get a little tougher each time to get you used to a better critique, but that's only if you don't mind it. And you can always say when to be a bit nicer. Because I'm just trying to learn how to give a really really god critique, but these are some of the things I know about it. And this gets a 3/5 out of 5 stars. Nice work!
Oh and should I translate this into a different language? I am able to do that if you want.
The blood looks like it could use a bit more detail to it, maybe adding a dark color to it would be nice, but it still looks nice.
And then Sonic is a bit OOC with the canon Sonic. And by a bit I mean a lot. Is this like... your AU where Sonic acts a bit like this? If so that's totally fine! I have an AU where Sonic is a shy little dork and way OOC from the canon Sonic too. So don't worry, i'm just wanting to know. But Sonic's face does look a bit creepy, even if he is meant to be, he should lower the smile a bit, and keep the lowered eyes.
Hopefully you didn't find this a too harsh. I might get a little tougher each time to get you used to a better critique, but that's only if you don't mind it. And you can always say when to be a bit nicer. Because I'm just trying to learn how to give a really really god critique, but these are some of the things I know about it. And this gets a 3/5 out of 5 stars. Nice work!
Oh and should I translate this into a different language? I am able to do that if you want.
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