Wally: Please don't die, Stan...

Paging Doctor Ratseye, paging Doctor Ratseye... heh heh. Nice chapter.

that is good

That was excellent and painful at the same time.
Only you could have moved me that much. Well done.

Can't wait for future chapters. I am really liking this series.

Thank you so very much for letting me take part of this chapter. The blending of the heart rate monitor and the song... The voices and emotion you put into this... *claps in the silence of the early morning in tears*

he lives...the old bear lives once more, to repent for the sins he faced not as himself, but his alter ego.

Sorry it took me so long to realise that you had all ready finished this chapter.

A really emotional chapter and defenately one of your best Beach Bears entry to date, I'm glad I could be of some help.

I think I'm gonna need another box of tissues.
I got the feeling that he would wake up at the very end, but still, I was on the edge of my seat waiting for it to happen, or not. Very well done.

So wait, are the injuries that Stan suffered during the crash supposed to imply that the 'Grizz' part of his psyche is dead now? I mean, it's stated that his motor skills might've been affected, which might imply some level of brain damage. And if Grizz is dead, then would that be considered an accidental homicide or a partially successful suicide attempt? And if he's not dead, then does that mean that he'll end up surfacing again in a later chapter to torment Stan later?

...Am I putting too much thought into this?

Yes.

Wow, incredibly powerful performance on this one, Max. That line where you're practically screaming in the song sent shivers down my spine. Really fantastic work. Truly.

I'd been planning this chapter for months. Glad to see I got the impact I was going for.

Dude...the beeping noise going along with the song is SO genius that I love the sound of it

And you just assume it's a heart monitor, until the music starts.

I admit, I am very proud of that.

you should be