After riots break out inside a prison designed to punish convicts by having them swallowed alive, various prisoners try to escape in the confusion, all while evading the prison guards and the many "customers" trying to eat them.
NOTE: So I decided to do something different this year. As opposed to doing just one Thanksgiving story on Thanksgiving day (or the day before) I decided to do five short stories, with one story being submitted from today all the way until Friday. All five of these stories are a sequel to "Eternal Prey," which you can read using the link I'll provide below.
Like last time, all five stories are dark and/or contain hard vore and/or gore. And some of them may contain "post-vore" scenes, for those of you into that.
Happy Turkey....Week!
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NOTE: So I decided to do something different this year. As opposed to doing just one Thanksgiving story on Thanksgiving day (or the day before) I decided to do five short stories, with one story being submitted from today all the way until Friday. All five of these stories are a sequel to "Eternal Prey," which you can read using the link I'll provide below.
Like last time, all five stories are dark and/or contain hard vore and/or gore. And some of them may contain "post-vore" scenes, for those of you into that.
Happy Turkey....Week!
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Awesome idea! One of my favorite story concepts of yours. Love the thought of gross things as punishment, and even more as an institutionalized punishment - where there's almost no chance of escaping, as well as the fact that the "victims" of it genuinely hate the punishment - it's not some "fetish" thing to then (though stories feel "faker" to me). Not the first time I've hit myself on the forehead wishing I had come up with the "Vore prison" idea first XD.
Looking forward to the rest of this series!
Looking forward to the rest of this series!
You seem to really enjoy the vore "punishment" stories I do. I've done quite a few smelly, gross punishment stories in the past, but you have a thing for anything I do involving maw-play. Or maybe these vore stories are inspiring you to do another one of your "Vile Punishment" stories and have it center around oral themes?
Oh, I also liked the one where the fox kidnaps the...lion, I think? And forces him to do all sorts of gross stuff. And many others, I know you've done a lot, I think you've also done ones where the victim ends up "liking it" by the end though, those are the ones I'm not quite as fond of (they're still good though, just not as appealing to me xD)
I think I read the one about the dragon before. Haven't had the time to check out the other ones yet, although I may check out the "Prisoners of War" story. I started reading the "Arena of Filth" series too some time ago, but kind of...lost track of that somehow. >__< I should get back to re-reading and finishing that.
And yes, the one about the fox and the lion.
Now that you mentioned it, I have done a lot of those "We're gonna torture you until you enjoy it!" stories. I do like making those, but compared to this story and "Eternal Prey" and "Bested by the Prey," these seem a bit more realistic. And somehow, a bit more appealing.
And yes, the one about the fox and the lion.
Now that you mentioned it, I have done a lot of those "We're gonna torture you until you enjoy it!" stories. I do like making those, but compared to this story and "Eternal Prey" and "Bested by the Prey," these seem a bit more realistic. And somehow, a bit more appealing.
Haha it's fine, write what you want to write! You think these more realistic "punishment" stories where the victim hates it is more appealing yourself, though? :)
And haha, AOf is pretty long and I never did get around to finishing it, I should still do that sometime >.<. Hope you liked what you read of it, though. You might like my two more recent stories (wolf pit and "a revolting curse,") if you have time to check those out
And haha, AOf is pretty long and I never did get around to finishing it, I should still do that sometime >.<. Hope you liked what you read of it, though. You might like my two more recent stories (wolf pit and "a revolting curse,") if you have time to check those out
It depends. Maybe it's not necessarily the "punishment" per say, but the overall realism that I find appealing. Hence why when people like me and
Acidic, for example, tend to do anything maw or vore related, we tend to go a bit "overboard" with the mouth details, such as all the saliva, the hot, stinky breath, the various, sharp-looking teeth, etc. I'm pretty sure being that close to any one of the maws Acidic has drawn wouldn't be very pleasant to see in real life. Or smell.
Acidic, for example, tend to do anything maw or vore related, we tend to go a bit "overboard" with the mouth details, such as all the saliva, the hot, stinky breath, the various, sharp-looking teeth, etc. I'm pretty sure being that close to any one of the maws Acidic has drawn wouldn't be very pleasant to see in real life. Or smell.
Haha, I like those details, especially being covered with saliva and enveloped with hot, incredibly foul breath, with no way to escape it. I'm sure a lot of my fantasies wouldn't be pleasant in real life to endure; that's kind of the point :p.
What's the worst thing you've ever smelled in real life?
What's the worst thing you've ever smelled in real life?
Since there's a lot of rotten things I'm sure I've smelled that I can't remember automatically, the one off the top of my head is rotten potatoes.
Yes, I'm serious. I'm perfectly fine around the garbage compactor at my job. I don't seem all that fazed when I drive past a dead deer lying on the side of the road. But the first time I smelled a rotting potato, that caught me off-guard. >__< It's a strange, extremely bitter odor that just does not smell right to me.
Yes, I'm serious. I'm perfectly fine around the garbage compactor at my job. I don't seem all that fazed when I drive past a dead deer lying on the side of the road. But the first time I smelled a rotting potato, that caught me off-guard. >__< It's a strange, extremely bitter odor that just does not smell right to me.
another good one, again i liked the references (FNAF2 FTW!) and it was well written, I liked the fight inside himself to try or not to escape, and the things that he thinks about when wh is escaping, and finally getting caught and eaten, and the way he thinks about his life as he is subjected to the caustic acids of the stomach.
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