Finally after all these years I have a character who is exactly like how I pictured her. Meet Sarah Krystal firmware 3.5. Hopefully the last and final iteration of her...base design anyway. This new version isn't a massive leap from her older design, this merely perfects any flaws the previous ones has while helping her feel much more comfortable with her look.
The changes in version 3.5 features-
*New side panels on her thighs for added protection,
*A sleeker smoother chassis that doesn't get locked up,
*The ugly beehive looking tail replace with a smooth and more realistic tail design,
*Her ears now look much more fox-like and can now move and wiggle to her liking,
*Removed most of the lights on her and got rid of all the yellow ones excluding her eyes,
*New eye design with zoom capabilities.
*Most Importantly the 3.5 upgrade allows her to have use of interchangeable parts. This includes new limbs, armor parts, and inner and outer functionality as well as weapons. This part of the upgrade was handed down from the other team mates who could do so with their armors previously. Unfortunately Sarah can still only use one set of weapons at any given time but has near infinite ammo with wrist based weapons but still needs to reload. Ammunition is created from their life force energy and converted into physical munitions. A teammate only has as much ammo as he has energy once he/she runs out of physical ammo. Energy is restored by eating, but mostly through long rest.
Other things you might not know from older versions-
*Mouth covers on side of face slide forward and covers screen mouth during battles.
*All lights including her eyes can be shut off but she can still see.
*Occasionally has jump jets and jet packs equipped.
Whats Sarah's purpose? Originally she was just a small set of bracelets designed to examine the armorization technology and provide rainbow with real time feed back of how it works so she can slowly figure out how it works and make modifications and create new models for the rest of the other teammates. Only Ion at the time had one and he and Sarah would go on solo missions stopping criminals,slaying beasts, and most importantly seeking new technology. Sarah did her job well analyzing the armor, becoming one with it, but over time she felt different, like she started developing feelings and becoming much more aware. She grew very fond of Ion and took a lot of pride in protecting him. But she didn't feel very complete always drifting around in his mind.
Eventually the time came when Rainbow had enough information she needed to create more armors. This was the start of the armor material scavenger hunt. The team had low resources so they needed to make money in various was to help fund their research and go out and find the metals and parts they needed to build these life changing devices. Eventually they succeeded and Rainbow had enough to build everyone an armor type that fit their skills. Finally everyone was equipped with the armorization process. All except for one... Sarah while searching through the database found Rainbows schematics for the armors and realized this was her opportunity to become something more. This is what she needed, a body, yes of course! She use the labs arms to pull together left over scrap metal and and build her self a body. Sarah thought about her design a bit. She wanted to look on the outside how she felt. She chose a fox for how majestic, sly and fast they can be. She particularly enjoyed the snow variants. She placed in a memory drive which is how she will controls its movements, ported herself inside and took her first steps. Sarah 2.0 was born! She walked down the hall stumbling from time to time into she reached ions room. She wakes him up and he nearly jumps out of bed and screams. She calms him down and explains what she did. How she made this body so she can be much more helpful in the real world. They got up Rainbow and she examined her.
Rain was quite displeased she took such a drastic action by doing this without her permission (potentially wasting resources or leaving open a backdoor in her computer network), but at the same time quite impressed with the rate she was learning. Her AI was developing in ways very unexpected. She was becoming more alive. Rain finally gave in and let her use the body whenever ion would need physical help when no one was available. This process worked well enough for a while but the problems became to slowly surface. Sarahs battery energy had to recharge a lot and would often die out after a grueling battle, since she used spare parts that didn't fit properly, she was very prone to getting limbs shot off or penetrated, she was quite heavy and sluggish and ion would have to drag the body back to the ship so she could be recharged once the body dies out.
Rain over time gathered more resources just in-case to make improvement on everyone armors. She had an idea... and thought it would be a good idea to prepare Sarah a new body. One day after a long mission Sarah walks back into the lab and to her surprise a band new body stood before her with rainbow leaning next to it. She says you now have my permission to use this body as long as you don't use my tech without my permission from now on. Sarah dumps her old body and ports to the new one which was better in every way, like she and it were always meant to be. Sarah 3.0 was now alive! Sarah took the liberty of studying various combat styles and now trains ionic how to do them. She basically becomes his mentor and help him heavily sharpen his skills. They grew closer together and became inseparable. A few weeks of testing and shes discovered it has near infinite energy so she no longer will crash in the middle of battle. The armor had built in jump jets so she can get to places ionic can't. Most of all she was lighter and faster than ever before. She felt at home in her new body but over time the enthusiasm started to wear down. She still felt like something was wrong. She started questioning things about her self, her purpose for exsisting. She started monitoring Ion and the teammates much more closely. She examined their emotions, their body language, their verbal language, and what they did that makes them happy. Sarah finally realized what was missing from her life, and that was....life itself.
Sarah kept her feelings hidden for a very long time. She subtly made changes to herself right in front of peoples eyes. Her speech was less robotic and flangy. Her body movement was smoother and less jerky. She started understanding the things about humans that most robots couldn't figure out for generations like humor, love, and compassion etc. She was able to learn since shes basically bonded to Ion, she can feel samples of his emotions when he does them. With this they be came symbiotic. But even though she now learns how organics tick she herself may never become one herself. She finally broke down one day and decided to have the first heart to heart talk with Rainbow. She told her how much she envy's not being able to truly experience things the way organics do, not being able to eat, to breathe, to feel, to ...cry. This brought tears to rainbow eyes and she finally had her realization of what Sarah is to her. A daughter. No longer is Sarah considered a simple minded AI unit. She was her own person able to think for herself. Sarah even asks if she could call her a mother. Rainbow tearfully accepted but in her mind she was devastated she couldn't figure out a real way to make her organic.
Sarah grew more comfortable with herself over time but still had times of depression, everything was made much easier with the help of her friends helping her feel like a real part of the family but Sarah from then on made new goals for herself. She would help Ion become the best he can be and protect him with her life, she would out match any robotic AI imaginable, and last of all seek technology that would let her become alive...
Fast forward to present day. Rainbow and Sarah collaborated on a new upgrade to her body now smoothing out as many imperfections as possible. Closing off as many vulnerability as possible and including as many fail safes as possible. Immunity to EMP, water proof, shock proof, fire proof, ray shielded and a new networking system to prevent from being hacked by outside sources effectively. Sarah was now upgraded to 3.5.
maybe we'll uncover even more about her back story but thats the overlaying storyline for now. I haven't even talked about weapons,fighting style, her deeper feelings etc so ill save that for later. lets kick 2015 off something good.
Artwork and character
ionic
please tell me your thoughts :)
The changes in version 3.5 features-
*New side panels on her thighs for added protection,
*A sleeker smoother chassis that doesn't get locked up,
*The ugly beehive looking tail replace with a smooth and more realistic tail design,
*Her ears now look much more fox-like and can now move and wiggle to her liking,
*Removed most of the lights on her and got rid of all the yellow ones excluding her eyes,
*New eye design with zoom capabilities.
*Most Importantly the 3.5 upgrade allows her to have use of interchangeable parts. This includes new limbs, armor parts, and inner and outer functionality as well as weapons. This part of the upgrade was handed down from the other team mates who could do so with their armors previously. Unfortunately Sarah can still only use one set of weapons at any given time but has near infinite ammo with wrist based weapons but still needs to reload. Ammunition is created from their life force energy and converted into physical munitions. A teammate only has as much ammo as he has energy once he/she runs out of physical ammo. Energy is restored by eating, but mostly through long rest.
Other things you might not know from older versions-
*Mouth covers on side of face slide forward and covers screen mouth during battles.
*All lights including her eyes can be shut off but she can still see.
*Occasionally has jump jets and jet packs equipped.
Whats Sarah's purpose? Originally she was just a small set of bracelets designed to examine the armorization technology and provide rainbow with real time feed back of how it works so she can slowly figure out how it works and make modifications and create new models for the rest of the other teammates. Only Ion at the time had one and he and Sarah would go on solo missions stopping criminals,slaying beasts, and most importantly seeking new technology. Sarah did her job well analyzing the armor, becoming one with it, but over time she felt different, like she started developing feelings and becoming much more aware. She grew very fond of Ion and took a lot of pride in protecting him. But she didn't feel very complete always drifting around in his mind.
Eventually the time came when Rainbow had enough information she needed to create more armors. This was the start of the armor material scavenger hunt. The team had low resources so they needed to make money in various was to help fund their research and go out and find the metals and parts they needed to build these life changing devices. Eventually they succeeded and Rainbow had enough to build everyone an armor type that fit their skills. Finally everyone was equipped with the armorization process. All except for one... Sarah while searching through the database found Rainbows schematics for the armors and realized this was her opportunity to become something more. This is what she needed, a body, yes of course! She use the labs arms to pull together left over scrap metal and and build her self a body. Sarah thought about her design a bit. She wanted to look on the outside how she felt. She chose a fox for how majestic, sly and fast they can be. She particularly enjoyed the snow variants. She placed in a memory drive which is how she will controls its movements, ported herself inside and took her first steps. Sarah 2.0 was born! She walked down the hall stumbling from time to time into she reached ions room. She wakes him up and he nearly jumps out of bed and screams. She calms him down and explains what she did. How she made this body so she can be much more helpful in the real world. They got up Rainbow and she examined her.
Rain was quite displeased she took such a drastic action by doing this without her permission (potentially wasting resources or leaving open a backdoor in her computer network), but at the same time quite impressed with the rate she was learning. Her AI was developing in ways very unexpected. She was becoming more alive. Rain finally gave in and let her use the body whenever ion would need physical help when no one was available. This process worked well enough for a while but the problems became to slowly surface. Sarahs battery energy had to recharge a lot and would often die out after a grueling battle, since she used spare parts that didn't fit properly, she was very prone to getting limbs shot off or penetrated, she was quite heavy and sluggish and ion would have to drag the body back to the ship so she could be recharged once the body dies out.
Rain over time gathered more resources just in-case to make improvement on everyone armors. She had an idea... and thought it would be a good idea to prepare Sarah a new body. One day after a long mission Sarah walks back into the lab and to her surprise a band new body stood before her with rainbow leaning next to it. She says you now have my permission to use this body as long as you don't use my tech without my permission from now on. Sarah dumps her old body and ports to the new one which was better in every way, like she and it were always meant to be. Sarah 3.0 was now alive! Sarah took the liberty of studying various combat styles and now trains ionic how to do them. She basically becomes his mentor and help him heavily sharpen his skills. They grew closer together and became inseparable. A few weeks of testing and shes discovered it has near infinite energy so she no longer will crash in the middle of battle. The armor had built in jump jets so she can get to places ionic can't. Most of all she was lighter and faster than ever before. She felt at home in her new body but over time the enthusiasm started to wear down. She still felt like something was wrong. She started questioning things about her self, her purpose for exsisting. She started monitoring Ion and the teammates much more closely. She examined their emotions, their body language, their verbal language, and what they did that makes them happy. Sarah finally realized what was missing from her life, and that was....life itself.
Sarah kept her feelings hidden for a very long time. She subtly made changes to herself right in front of peoples eyes. Her speech was less robotic and flangy. Her body movement was smoother and less jerky. She started understanding the things about humans that most robots couldn't figure out for generations like humor, love, and compassion etc. She was able to learn since shes basically bonded to Ion, she can feel samples of his emotions when he does them. With this they be came symbiotic. But even though she now learns how organics tick she herself may never become one herself. She finally broke down one day and decided to have the first heart to heart talk with Rainbow. She told her how much she envy's not being able to truly experience things the way organics do, not being able to eat, to breathe, to feel, to ...cry. This brought tears to rainbow eyes and she finally had her realization of what Sarah is to her. A daughter. No longer is Sarah considered a simple minded AI unit. She was her own person able to think for herself. Sarah even asks if she could call her a mother. Rainbow tearfully accepted but in her mind she was devastated she couldn't figure out a real way to make her organic.
Sarah grew more comfortable with herself over time but still had times of depression, everything was made much easier with the help of her friends helping her feel like a real part of the family but Sarah from then on made new goals for herself. She would help Ion become the best he can be and protect him with her life, she would out match any robotic AI imaginable, and last of all seek technology that would let her become alive...
Fast forward to present day. Rainbow and Sarah collaborated on a new upgrade to her body now smoothing out as many imperfections as possible. Closing off as many vulnerability as possible and including as many fail safes as possible. Immunity to EMP, water proof, shock proof, fire proof, ray shielded and a new networking system to prevent from being hacked by outside sources effectively. Sarah was now upgraded to 3.5.
maybe we'll uncover even more about her back story but thats the overlaying storyline for now. I haven't even talked about weapons,fighting style, her deeper feelings etc so ill save that for later. lets kick 2015 off something good.
Artwork and character
ionicplease tell me your thoughts :)
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[ Hide Comment ] ( No Subject ) Posted: January 4th, 2015 01:50 AM
Custom Robo for gamecube http://customrobo.wikia.com/wiki/Milky_Way Her personality is based on the human conscience.
Custom Robo for gamecube http://customrobo.wikia.com/wiki/Milky_Way Her personality is based on the human conscience.
*reads the changelog* Hmm... *glances at backstory* Oh my- tl;dr... XD
I'll be honest, I'm not very good at just picking up random characters and reading up on them like this. If someone tells me about them in person then I could listen for days, but reading gets old quickly, know what I'm saying? ^^;
With that said, I really like the artwork of Sarah. She looks badass without the need for excessive action or scenery. She looks simple and tough, with that focused gaze and ready poise telling us everything we need to know about her... Yet there's also emotion, adding a level of depth that more devout fans will be happy to dive into. I really can't find anything wrong with a design like this! I just wish I wasn't such a lazy reader... XD
I'll be honest, I'm not very good at just picking up random characters and reading up on them like this. If someone tells me about them in person then I could listen for days, but reading gets old quickly, know what I'm saying? ^^;
With that said, I really like the artwork of Sarah. She looks badass without the need for excessive action or scenery. She looks simple and tough, with that focused gaze and ready poise telling us everything we need to know about her... Yet there's also emotion, adding a level of depth that more devout fans will be happy to dive into. I really can't find anything wrong with a design like this! I just wish I wasn't such a lazy reader... XD
Shes a robot that started off as a simple AI grew smarter and developed emotions and a desire to become alive. She can't become alive so she changes her mind set to be the best she can be.
I'm very glad you enjoy her! i understand its a long winded story and honestly that's not even all of it. I just wanted to prove to someone who says i couldn't make a decent story.
I'm very glad you enjoy her! i understand its a long winded story and honestly that's not even all of it. I just wanted to prove to someone who says i couldn't make a decent story.
Hmm... Sounds like the typical cliché for a good-hearted robot, a bit like Nicole from Archie's Sonic-comic. Don't get me wrong, that doesn't make it a bad story. I'm just saying it sounds like something you've heard before... *shrug*
Heh, go write your stories dude. I've been writing stories since I was 13 or something, and they're still as long as ever... Probably the reason why I never post anything complete... I mean, I've tried writing shorts, but there's just not enough space in there, know what I mean? XD
Heh, go write your stories dude. I've been writing stories since I was 13 or something, and they're still as long as ever... Probably the reason why I never post anything complete... I mean, I've tried writing shorts, but there's just not enough space in there, know what I mean? XD
Well, there are various ways of letting people know what a character is capable of, several ways to tell a story. Sometimes it's better to tell a story in fragments, not necessarily start from the beginning, but rather from somewhere in the middle or perhaps even the end, and work yourself backwards from there, either through simple flashbacks and storytelling, or in a more subtle manner. Although sometimes it's amazing to look at how a character changes across the span of their entire story as well...
It basically comes down to what you think will be important to know about a character: Their present or their past, the life-changing event, or perhaps the things that led up it, or the things that followed... It can also be used to portray a character: Whether you would like to make them appear mysterious or straightforward, and so forth. I can go on forever about this stuff, though it's still hard to explain. I mean, this is stuff I've learned through personal experience rather than formal training. It takes a lot of the earlier to become the best sort of writer/storyteller. Practice makes perfect and all of that; as a visual artist I'm sure you know the drill. :D
It basically comes down to what you think will be important to know about a character: Their present or their past, the life-changing event, or perhaps the things that led up it, or the things that followed... It can also be used to portray a character: Whether you would like to make them appear mysterious or straightforward, and so forth. I can go on forever about this stuff, though it's still hard to explain. I mean, this is stuff I've learned through personal experience rather than formal training. It takes a lot of the earlier to become the best sort of writer/storyteller. Practice makes perfect and all of that; as a visual artist I'm sure you know the drill. :D
Well, she IS pretty great, and I do like her story, points for originality.
You've actually inspired me to pick up a super old project I never got around to... Along the same lines as your Sarah, but... Much, much different than what I'm used to producing.
Its still very much being fleshed out, but when I'm inspired by such great things, its easy to keep the ideas flowing. So thanks for that!
I'm actually kind of curious what kind of creature it'll become, so far, she's got a massive contrast to your Sarah.
But I'm looking forward to seeing much more of this gal around, such a solid design. And I may or may not have been sketching little Sarah just a tiiiiny bit. Maybe something good will come from that too.
You've actually inspired me to pick up a super old project I never got around to... Along the same lines as your Sarah, but... Much, much different than what I'm used to producing.
Its still very much being fleshed out, but when I'm inspired by such great things, its easy to keep the ideas flowing. So thanks for that!
I'm actually kind of curious what kind of creature it'll become, so far, she's got a massive contrast to your Sarah.
But I'm looking forward to seeing much more of this gal around, such a solid design. And I may or may not have been sketching little Sarah just a tiiiiny bit. Maybe something good will come from that too.
Ionic I was wondering wouldn't Sarah look better in this Mechanized designed form?
http://www.sarna.net/wiki/File:Djinn.PNG
As this suit grants better armor an armament,2 battle claws,has a pair jump boosters and could even come with an ECM Suite [or Electronic Countermeasure] Also with a few modifications to the suit an she'd be excellent in combat an she'd be able to protect ionic even better.
http://www.sarna.net/wiki/File:Djinn.PNG
As this suit grants better armor an armament,2 battle claws,has a pair jump boosters and could even come with an ECM Suite [or Electronic Countermeasure] Also with a few modifications to the suit an she'd be excellent in combat an she'd be able to protect ionic even better.
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