
Speedart for myself.
My dragon Veikhil.
My dragon Veikhil.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Portraits
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1280 x 1280px
File Size 197.5 kB
I think the picture is very good.
I specially enjoyed the coloring, and out of the coloring, the eyes.
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I think the upper part of the mouth (the palate) shouldn't be visible; since the upper part of the muzzle is visible the palate should be almost parallel to the viewer. As it is, it looks as if the upper part of her mouth was slightly asymmetric (tilted, with the left side above the right side).
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I specially enjoyed the coloring, and out of the coloring, the eyes.
=====critique (don't read if uninterested)=====
I think the upper part of the mouth (the palate) shouldn't be visible; since the upper part of the muzzle is visible the palate should be almost parallel to the viewer. As it is, it looks as if the upper part of her mouth was slightly asymmetric (tilted, with the left side above the right side).
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