ahh, leaving us with a cliff hanger? That's not fair. Good writing in this, and it's nice to see you've gone the root of actually putting in a story, and only throwing in the muscle as a plot element. Nice job!

Thanks, and don't worry, the next chapter should be a bit easier to write. Depending on how it turns out, there might be a mini-chapter afterwords, or Epilogue to the story. But we'll see. I want it known I started this as a leaping off story. Anyone who likes any of the chapters can always pick it up again with Jake exploring ways to experience the changes he had in this story again. So fat furs can write about him enjoying being fat and wanting to be so again, muscle furs can do the same with this chapter, and I do hope the macro furs like the last one.

Nice story, leaving on a cliff hanger like that always makes me want to read the next chapter.

excellently played
hehehe

i'm getting excellent mental images from the dialog on jakes form and shape and it just makes me super giddy.

god please finish the final chapter

weeeeee

heheh sweet jakes getting bigger and stronger tho might be fallinginto trouble because of it