I don't know what has in your stories, but this one and about Pandora, Make me curious of the beginning to the end of each chapter. ^.=.^

Fantastic.

How did you come up with Jasmine's language?

I tried to think how another language could evolve from the same roots such as Latin, etcetera, then used some imagination.

....that's ingenious.

Nice work. the language sounds Germanic.

There a few awkward sentences, a few missing words, but the story floes well and your pacing as always is very good.

Excellent job, I was drawn to the story, and want to read more! Nice use of language, and all that.

-Sam

wow. well thought out. can't wait to see what happens next!

How delightful to find your stories online! Love the art for this set -- beautiful work.

I'm not sure how you managed the language, but that's well done. Some of it looks like Very Old English (14th and 15th century) but I'm not enough of a student of historical English to know.

You won't find the language in any text book. I used my knowledge of various languages to extrapolate how a modern language might evolve in a different manner. Therefore many words sound very familiar, and yet are not the same.

Anyway, I'm glad that you like the story. I need to polish up the last chapter of Jazmyn because I'm not totally satisfied with it, but overall that has been one of my favourite stories to write.

loved the story from 1 to 8.it's a really good read.ill have to go back and read everything from you!

oddly enuff, i was able to understand EXACTLY what she said first! don't ask me how though.