Wow!
Fantastic!

Uhu. Very nice.

cryptic, nice and moody.

that wolf guy in panels #1 and 2, is he wearing a brass amrour roman style, or formed leather? in any case make sure the straps to hold the pieces together are seen in close-ups. one needs such pieces to be at least two-parted (with the seam running down armpit-to-waist) in order to be donned and removed.

everything else is fine.
"Died absurdly" sounds wrong somehow... I would use, "died absurd deaths" or soemthing. a native speaker can give you better advice, I guess. :)

Yeah, doens't convince me much, I know the pharse exist as such, but am not pretty sure it sounds exact as I had in mind... have to make my mind about, and a native speaker could be of good help, if ever find him.

Thanks for your comments, you give me things to think I hadn't gave a second view, like the vestuary: I think the wolf should have some sort of flexyble leather-like suit, is not too much of an armor as decorative, so to speak. A few weeks ago I had the chance to see a complete guide of drawing armors and geez, I have to start thinking about functionality!

Have a funny day, BTW =)

glad to be of service. as a 'dyed-in-the-wool' role-playing gamer those details fall into the eye. ;)

a funny day? it's almost over now. :) funny, yet exhausting. going to school with a bunch of people with all levels of education is... interesting. :P

i was there
when genesis played their first gig
but i'm losing my edge

Is that a song? =3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OzuFeXYbOOo

(irritating video, and it's not as good as a radio edit. but you get the idea.)