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This is Chapter 1 to a commissioned novel. It takes place in the Caretaker Universe, and is universe canon. The story follows Milo, a disillusioned millennial like so many others that just can't seem to catch a break.
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I love writing for you guys. It’s my passion, my hobby, and, for the past two years, my primary source of income. I do my best to keep a steady supply of new, original material for all of you to read, and, if I entertained you, a favorite, comment, or watch means the world to me! If you’re especially fond of my work, or want something more personalized, feel free to note me with a request idea or order a commission!
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Break In The Wind
Chapter 1
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Category Story / Baby fur
Species Housecat
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 21 kB
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Just to preface this, I enjoy your work. However, I am curious whether you have a prereader, as I noticed a few homonym typos and minor misspellings. For example, you wrote "Peeked his interest" when it should be "Piqued", and "brooch the subject" when it should be "broach".
But I digress Looking forward to reading your other stories :)
But I digress Looking forward to reading your other stories :)
Nope ^^ I've tried a few times, with a few different people, but I haven't really found anyone that's clicked yet. Usually I edit my own work once the entire piece is done, which this one is far from being, and, in general, most commissions don't get edited at all. When I start doing more personal work, that will probably change, but, for the moment, the small typos are an unfortunate consequence of my laziness xD
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