wow this is awesome

Well I promised myself that I was going to review this and today is the day that I am going to do it:

First of is that I really like the lightness of the comic, it is rare to find a light comic that can keep me hooked because I believe in the importance of the plot, however here you show me that even if you have a somewhat "light" plot you can keep me entertained with each page, how do you ask? well the execution, at last for me it is very good, each character is not only likeable but also you manage to give them a very unique personality so each one of them responds different to the situation that they are going through, this really impressed me because there are several of them and that is not easy, the only thing that I have to say is that the transition between page 21 and 22 was too sudden for my taste, I believe that it is because I was expecting something more happens in that scene.

Now for the art itself I feel that I only have the right to say that you have improved a lot since you started drawing ( the way that you can make the deepness of backgrounds is very is very good, I don't have enough skill for that yet), now there is room to improve? But of course, an artist never ends to learn something new, but I believe that you are in the right path, congratulations.

I really hope that this review help you to improve this comic.

Sorry if there are some grammar mistakes in this review, english is not my mothertongue and I am still learning it.

Thank you very much for your feedback. I'm glad I could keep you entertained along the way, and I hope you keep reading!

Awesome work again. Love the way you set up a scene. Like a miniature story unfolding amidst the larger one.

What I like is that there are at least 3 stories all happening at once, all interacting with each other but not interfering with each other. I don't know how I could do this as a written story.