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(Contains pool toy transformation and inflation)
Another pool toy transformation story, this one also with inflation. Lilith, my lovely Delphox, finds herself in some odd circumstances. I really do like Delphox and like Delphox balloons even more. Had a lot of fun writing this, so please let me know what you think or how I can improve.
Fun fact: I was originally going to do this as a story where she answered questions and for each she got right, she would blow up a bit, until becoming just a big balloon. But couldn't think of a way to write it to get her to the game. She's pretty clever in battle, but is a bit naïve and not the most booksmart of all Psychic types.
It was also partially inspired by a recurring nightmare I have near the end of the semester and after it where I wake up thinking I still need to take an exam. Not fun.
Another pool toy transformation story, this one also with inflation. Lilith, my lovely Delphox, finds herself in some odd circumstances. I really do like Delphox and like Delphox balloons even more. Had a lot of fun writing this, so please let me know what you think or how I can improve.
Fun fact: I was originally going to do this as a story where she answered questions and for each she got right, she would blow up a bit, until becoming just a big balloon. But couldn't think of a way to write it to get her to the game. She's pretty clever in battle, but is a bit naïve and not the most booksmart of all Psychic types.
It was also partially inspired by a recurring nightmare I have near the end of the semester and after it where I wake up thinking I still need to take an exam. Not fun.
Category Story / All
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 15.5 kB
Thanks for the feedback. Any is helpful.
I did notice that I use a lot of commas and have weird structure when writing. Just one of the many things I need to work on.
Other thing that some people have told me is that I need to work on is more detail with the actual transformation and inflation parts. I'll definitely do more stories like these though since they're really fun to write (And I love me some puffy Delphox)
Cover art is not something I can do. No artistic ability, no money to commission people to do the art.
I did notice that I use a lot of commas and have weird structure when writing. Just one of the many things I need to work on.
Other thing that some people have told me is that I need to work on is more detail with the actual transformation and inflation parts. I'll definitely do more stories like these though since they're really fun to write (And I love me some puffy Delphox)
Cover art is not something I can do. No artistic ability, no money to commission people to do the art.
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