Very nice start, looking forward to the next chapter. The characterization is excellent, you really get a feel for Cinnamon's backstory.

Its interesting, Ill give it a watch... muahahahaha

I think my one complaint is that the court conviction feels too contrived. No legitimate legal court would consider video evidence so immaterial that the defense is not even allowed to review it. I understand the purpose of the scene is to show the level of corruption within the justice system there, but that seems too flagrant to be believable. A claim that the video has some kind of state secret or the like which makes it's contents classified would seem more appropriate (and be a lot harder for the defense to argue against).

Thanks for the feedback

I'll keep that in mind if I use the justice system in this setting again :)
It is quite unbelievably corrupt >.>

Hahaha, this is going to be America in about four to eight years.

This wouldn't surprise me!

Do hope you enjoyed the story!

Yes indeed, speculative fiction is a rare treat these days.

Huh when i saw the word vulcan i thoguht it might have been refering to this
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2672714/
But its a different series and i actually read the description. Should be an interesting read :)