Its not bad for 1st time, remmember more you would draw bettr you get.
Also try to find some tutorials on yt(it will help) and if you draw somethink be patient(for exaple this drawing i was doing 8hours: http://imgur.com/To69nn8 (its not done yet I'll post on my profile when i finish)and i was on your level of skill 3months ago)
And never give up begginins could be bad but you will see progres, chatch my watch im looking to see your progers.

Thank you.And yeah i really need to spend more time on drawing.and Thank you ill have a look on yt