Ivan or Isaac?

whoops~
hahaha! sleep deprivation is bad

The sixth sense! Ivan was dead from the beginning!!!!!

I've accepted that Isaac is dead, just sad to hear him go. Unfortunately events like that one do happen and we gotta accept the truth. Great comic! Loved every page...well, I will once it finishes

dawwwww thats cute and sad if he is dead, he better not be.

Delicious! <33

Kinda hard to hold the feelings here. Ivan's really strong.

Daww

Meep... the last panels made me feel all sad and happy at the same time... this comic has been such an emotional roller coaster... but so gewd ;w;

Yay! Gray's Back!

Well that opens many possibilities in the story, we don't actually know if Isaac is dead or not because it hasn't been explictly said, all we know is ''he can't bring him back". If Black is planning more comics he could make one more about Hector and Gray, then next time do a sequel to Ivan's side of story, and eventually bring Isaac back... unless he decides he has really died.

Unfortunately, based off that he said in the description here - "I like how you guys are in denial that Isaac's dead. xD" - It would seem he is indeed dead. ;-; As much as I wish little Isaac was fine

actually he could be something worse just read between the lines. Could be in a veggitative coma, or a few other possibilities. Although death seems the most simple one.

I want to cry and I don't want to at the same time

We all know Isaac isn't dead. You'll bring him back....I know it.

*sniff* I always have a mixed emotional state of mind with bittersweet stories like this. You had me really invested in the story and I can only thank you for taking time to see it through so well this far

OK this is sweet but not Isaac dead, please no, do another flashback when he has to do a lot of rehabilitation but not kill him like this

To be fair I think you had your climax and people are still talking about it three pages later.. It's been a rather nice wrap up.

Well you started the comic saying that did happen two months ago, so it´s a reassonable time to be on hospital. big trailers can go uberfast on citties and... what am i talking about.. we don´t know a fuck and want to know moaaaaar *bittes a telephonic guide*

Also.. family time ! :D Big brother aproves it, Nya! :D Now it´s time for Ivan to say something like we were chatting about my bro thinking to marry you..so don´t worry.. and cut the comic there hahaha XDD Yep.. big brothers are like this D: I have got a BB too.. i can detect a patron here.. >,>

Please tell me there's another series coming T.T I hope he finds someone new

They say something about souls.
When one departs, it'll be retrieved in another body.

What if...

So cute

I just hope isac is not die :( ..and just sleeping in a coma for now ...and if he is ..hope that he'll get wake right after ivan confess to him >\\\< <3

Just notice now, Gray has the same Nose, muzzle and ears like the other Felines o.o
Okay probably I dont know what a "Dork" is XD
Anyway
Adorable *w* Love Grays Naughtyness X3

you you can blame that on his style, on page one Gray's ears are quite different

they both look so cute... *sighs*

Gray looks a bit different from the first comic

Why gray is feline? Gray was a dog/wolf?

You used a cat and colored it gray xD.. only, take a look of PG 1 of Only Memory

so Issac and Grey are similar :D

Dam you Blackmailz you made me feel until 3 am in the morning X(
Truthfully i love the story since it settles on a semi hapy and sad ending at the same time

Does Issac just lose his memory?

I shall blackmail you to bring Isaac back.

Blackmailz could still surprise us in the last page. I still can't make up who the other person in the last panel of pg 38 is. (Exept for Isaac, in my amnesia theory)

Well, this page made whole comic more happier, Isaac death is untold but logic. I have hope only for Ivan find someone new, who love's him.

You want people to accept that Isaac is dead more readily? Here's a tip. Don't rely so heavily on deus ex machina to kill your characters for the sake of a "moral." Create a realistic scenario, which is NOT a 16-wheeler barreling down a city street without anyone noticing it, or it attempting to stop/notify the person it's about to hit sooner.

And certainly don't follow it up with a funny spit-take followed by light-hearted conversation. The impact of what you're trying to get across is diminished.

Making a story bittersweet is an art. An unrealistic character death and no tonal shift despite obviously powerful memories and emotions isn't good writing.

THAT BEING SAID, it's a cute comic with a good moral and actual characters with emotions and shit. Overall, I do like it, it's just a matter of an inappropriate tone (and unrealistic character death) that kinda kills these last few pages.

Lets just say that there were reasons for that funny spit-take follow up. One of them is to avoid the comic to drag on too long. I know it will diminish its impact. In fact the original script that i written has waaaaay longer...route? Sooo i have to retake on the whole impact thing and maybe make a spin off that focuses on Ivan, cause this comic, although focuses on Ivan's story, were still in fact revolves more around Hector and Gray (more notably on Hector's decision to make Gray's his husband).

ALSO a HUUUUGE MAYBE
I'm still rearranging the story line to make it a bit smoother to the next sequel.

I totally agree with this, the sudden spit take confused me, I had to re-read to figure out what was going on, I still am not sure why he did the spit take, nor why Ivan said he deserved that, considering what was just said.... It all just seemed off and confusing. He could've simply cut to them looking at eachother, with solemn looks. and it would've been much better.

oh! the 4th panel, the feelings!

I'm crying when read this page, nice I like it