At best this song is pretty mediocre, but it does have some good potential, there was a lot of places that could be improved. The off beat drum loop at the very beginning sets a really low expectation for the rest of the song, which rises slightly above that expectation overall. In the middle, it felt at some points that too much was going on and was slightly distracting. The constant loop of the synth for a minute or two at the end of the song left me thinking "What were you thinking?" because you had a good melody going and then took that away without any compensating factors.

Well, keep on improving.

This is one of my older works. Thank you for your contribution, but I suggest giving tips to improve in the future of you're going to criticize work, so as to be constructive.