i hope it works this time Q~Q....... i didn't have anyone that could proof read this so I'm sorry if something is messed up DX (just in case it doesn't open this time DX )
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Journey`s beginnings
dying paladin: “You may have beaten us but those injuries will get you… just wait demon”
…….
Paladin knight has died,
You gain 500 exp
You travel forty miles before clasping.
You feel a little better and regain conciseness for a moment
???:“Hey” …. “You are going to be okay, I’m a medic.”
You pass out
Some time later:
???:“She’s dangerous!”
???:“She hasn’t even woken up since I brought her in”
???:“And what will you do when she wakes up??” “She is a demon and needs to be killed”
???:“Well for a demon she looks pretty human, maybe your just being paranoid because you know nothing about her”
???:“I know those injuries were caused by a light blade, those are only used against demons”
???:“There have been times when they have been wrong and killed humans by mistakes!!”
???:"THAT IS NOT A HUMAN IN THERE!!"
???:"get out"
As you lay in bed you hear the sound of steps leading away from the room you are in. you can hear the sound of a door opening.
???: “I know what I’m doing...”
???: “I hope you do, we will suffer for it if you don’t”
you hear the door close and its silent for e moment, then you hear20the sound of steps coming towards the room your in. you can see the door knob turning and the door slowly opens. Standing in the doorway is a tall blond man.
???: "nice to see you awake instead of thrashing about in your sleep. I'm Jarlow, I healed most of your wounds but it will still be another day before you are fully healed. What’s you name?"
Val: “I’m called Val, why did you help me?"
Jarlow: "I'm a healer, that’s my job"
Val: "that’s a pathetic reason to help people you don't know"
Jarlow: "Then it’s a pathetic reason that you’re still alive”
Val: “Tell me where I am!!”
Jarlow: “Say please”
Val: “no”
Jarlow: “then I guess I you don’t care where you are.” “I have some food ready if you want something to eat”
Val: “I’m not hungry”
A small grumble escapes your belly and your face turns a little red
Jarlow: “Doesn’t sound like the rest of your body agrees with you, I’ll give you some time to get up”
Jarlow turns and leaves the room closing the door behind him. You continue to lay in the bed before finally getting up and heading for the door. After opening the door you scan your new surroundings. IT appears you are in some form of manor with several decorations around the walls and tables. Jarlow is setting some plates on a table on the other side of the room and there are already a few dishes of food sitting around the table.
Jarlow: “Nice to see you decided to join me”
You don’t answer him as you take a few steps into the room to continue examining it.
Val: “Healers don’t normally have such nice places as this”
Jarlow: “Most healers aren’t from noble families”
Val: “…. There’s no way you’re a noble”
Jarlow laughed a little as he finished setting the silverware and then took a seat. He began to whisper something which you believe is supposed to be some form of pray. You walk over to the table and take a place a few seats away from him and begin looking the food over, you’re not really sure if it’s edible. Jarlow places what looks like a potato onto his plate and begins to cut it down the middle when he notices the look on your face.
Jarlow: “My cooking isn’t that bad, I promise”
Val: “right…”
You read out and grab what you hope is a piece of chicken and place it on your plate. As you start to cut into it a strange blue-ish liquid leaks out.
Val: “… I think ill pass on eating for now”
Jarlow: “It tastes much better then what it looks”
Val: “it looks like blood…”
Jarlow: “That’s because it is blood”
Val: “… got anything that doesn’t have blood or another liquid in it?”
Jarlow: “Well you could eats some pittans”
Val: “and a pittan is?”
Jarlow: “what I’m eating now, you’re not from around here are you?”
You grab a pittan from the plate they are sitting on and cut off a small piece of it. You try the piece you cut off and it taste pretty good.
Val: “Who were you taking to?”
Jarlow: “heard that did you? That was ShadowRose; she is in charge of training the members of this village for the militia. As I’m sure you heard; she doesn’t like the fact that you are here but she will not start a too much trouble over it.”
Val: “too much trouble, for you or me?”
Jarlow: “Both of us. You didn’t answer my question”
Val: “I figured you would answer it yourself based on my appearance”
Jarlow: “Well considering you look different from when I found you it could be hard to tell where you are truly from.”
You stop eating and look Jarlow in the eyes slightly confused by what he just said to you.
Val: “What do you mean I look different…? This is how I always look”
Jarlow now looks as confused as you do and the two of you sit there in silence staring at each other.
Jarlow: “When I first found you your body was much different then it is now. For starters you had a set of wings and claws. You were also a little bigger then you are now with longer, pointier ears. Other then being covered in blood the only other thing that was different about you then was the color of your eyes…. They were black with a dot of red in the center.”
Val: “……”
You don’t give a reply to what Jarlow told you and sit there thinking, trying to control yourself to avoid letting Jarlow know you recognize that description from stories you heard back in your home village when you were a little girl.
Jarlow: “You really have no idea what I’m talking about do you? What were you doing before I found you?”
Val: “I remember walking through a forest…. And then you were talking to me”
Jarlow: “Interesting.”
The two of you don’t talk again and finish eating. You return to the room you had been sleeping in. After you shut the door behind you, you begin crying uncontrollably …
End part 1
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Journey`s beginnings
dying paladin: “You may have beaten us but those injuries will get you… just wait demon”
…….
Paladin knight has died,
You gain 500 exp
You travel forty miles before clasping.
You feel a little better and regain conciseness for a moment
???:“Hey” …. “You are going to be okay, I’m a medic.”
You pass out
Some time later:
???:“She’s dangerous!”
???:“She hasn’t even woken up since I brought her in”
???:“And what will you do when she wakes up??” “She is a demon and needs to be killed”
???:“Well for a demon she looks pretty human, maybe your just being paranoid because you know nothing about her”
???:“I know those injuries were caused by a light blade, those are only used against demons”
???:“There have been times when they have been wrong and killed humans by mistakes!!”
???:"THAT IS NOT A HUMAN IN THERE!!"
???:"get out"
As you lay in bed you hear the sound of steps leading away from the room you are in. you can hear the sound of a door opening.
???: “I know what I’m doing...”
???: “I hope you do, we will suffer for it if you don’t”
you hear the door close and its silent for e moment, then you hear20the sound of steps coming towards the room your in. you can see the door knob turning and the door slowly opens. Standing in the doorway is a tall blond man.
???: "nice to see you awake instead of thrashing about in your sleep. I'm Jarlow, I healed most of your wounds but it will still be another day before you are fully healed. What’s you name?"
Val: “I’m called Val, why did you help me?"
Jarlow: "I'm a healer, that’s my job"
Val: "that’s a pathetic reason to help people you don't know"
Jarlow: "Then it’s a pathetic reason that you’re still alive”
Val: “Tell me where I am!!”
Jarlow: “Say please”
Val: “no”
Jarlow: “then I guess I you don’t care where you are.” “I have some food ready if you want something to eat”
Val: “I’m not hungry”
A small grumble escapes your belly and your face turns a little red
Jarlow: “Doesn’t sound like the rest of your body agrees with you, I’ll give you some time to get up”
Jarlow turns and leaves the room closing the door behind him. You continue to lay in the bed before finally getting up and heading for the door. After opening the door you scan your new surroundings. IT appears you are in some form of manor with several decorations around the walls and tables. Jarlow is setting some plates on a table on the other side of the room and there are already a few dishes of food sitting around the table.
Jarlow: “Nice to see you decided to join me”
You don’t answer him as you take a few steps into the room to continue examining it.
Val: “Healers don’t normally have such nice places as this”
Jarlow: “Most healers aren’t from noble families”
Val: “…. There’s no way you’re a noble”
Jarlow laughed a little as he finished setting the silverware and then took a seat. He began to whisper something which you believe is supposed to be some form of pray. You walk over to the table and take a place a few seats away from him and begin looking the food over, you’re not really sure if it’s edible. Jarlow places what looks like a potato onto his plate and begins to cut it down the middle when he notices the look on your face.
Jarlow: “My cooking isn’t that bad, I promise”
Val: “right…”
You read out and grab what you hope is a piece of chicken and place it on your plate. As you start to cut into it a strange blue-ish liquid leaks out.
Val: “… I think ill pass on eating for now”
Jarlow: “It tastes much better then what it looks”
Val: “it looks like blood…”
Jarlow: “That’s because it is blood”
Val: “… got anything that doesn’t have blood or another liquid in it?”
Jarlow: “Well you could eats some pittans”
Val: “and a pittan is?”
Jarlow: “what I’m eating now, you’re not from around here are you?”
You grab a pittan from the plate they are sitting on and cut off a small piece of it. You try the piece you cut off and it taste pretty good.
Val: “Who were you taking to?”
Jarlow: “heard that did you? That was ShadowRose; she is in charge of training the members of this village for the militia. As I’m sure you heard; she doesn’t like the fact that you are here but she will not start a too much trouble over it.”
Val: “too much trouble, for you or me?”
Jarlow: “Both of us. You didn’t answer my question”
Val: “I figured you would answer it yourself based on my appearance”
Jarlow: “Well considering you look different from when I found you it could be hard to tell where you are truly from.”
You stop eating and look Jarlow in the eyes slightly confused by what he just said to you.
Val: “What do you mean I look different…? This is how I always look”
Jarlow now looks as confused as you do and the two of you sit there in silence staring at each other.
Jarlow: “When I first found you your body was much different then it is now. For starters you had a set of wings and claws. You were also a little bigger then you are now with longer, pointier ears. Other then being covered in blood the only other thing that was different about you then was the color of your eyes…. They were black with a dot of red in the center.”
Val: “……”
You don’t give a reply to what Jarlow told you and sit there thinking, trying to control yourself to avoid letting Jarlow know you recognize that description from stories you heard back in your home village when you were a little girl.
Jarlow: “You really have no idea what I’m talking about do you? What were you doing before I found you?”
Val: “I remember walking through a forest…. And then you were talking to me”
Jarlow: “Interesting.”
The two of you don’t talk again and finish eating. You return to the room you had been sleeping in. After you shut the door behind you, you begin crying uncontrollably …
End part 1
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I'm a little confused as to Val's character's motivation... She 'seems' to feel a strong connection to being human for someone who has only BEEN human for a matter of hours. o.o
Was she a human before she was a demon? Or did her transformation give her human memories?
....veeery interestinik... I would think that a real healer would keep someone like Val quarintined... guessing he has some unexplaned motives yet...
Was she a human before she was a demon? Or did her transformation give her human memories?
....veeery interestinik... I would think that a real healer would keep someone like Val quarintined... guessing he has some unexplaned motives yet...
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