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![[P] Chrysalis](http://d.furaffinity.net/art/pita-tenten/1471203509/1471203509.pita-tenten_chrysalis.png "Click to change the View")
This was just an unfinished picture on my laptop. I figured I'd finish it today. :)
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Oohhh very nice! I like her face while giving the tail thing the ball haha.
Um some crits though, her arms seem to be very long (unless that is her species?) When the entire arm is at rest then the wrists will be level with the groin area, so you can try and calculate it from there xp also the elbows are kind of at the waist too. What I do is I would pose the arm myself and just measure the heights loosely.
...although you got the elbow part right so I believe it's because the upper torso area is slightly too long.
One more thing, her right breast (her right) should either be shown past her arm underneath or the left breast (her left) should be smaller, because right now it looks like the right breast is about half the size of the left one.
Oooh wait just one more hahaha. So her tail is full if fur I'm assuming, but there are only a few tufts that are sticking out and their length compared to the black and white transition don't exactly match, it'd be cooler if you'd be able to make them look more similar I believe, and maybe add more bits sticking out especially near the head, or if the head is smooth skin/scales/whatever then signify that by shading or some lined detailing.
Anywhooo!!! Yes this is pretty interesting hehe, what I'd the story behind this I wonder? I like the contrast of the expressions and it seems like her tail is quite a bothersome thing looking at her face and how it's just drooling over the ball. I also like that curl at the end of the mouth, it's a cute touch!!
>w< very nice image Pita!!
Um some crits though, her arms seem to be very long (unless that is her species?) When the entire arm is at rest then the wrists will be level with the groin area, so you can try and calculate it from there xp also the elbows are kind of at the waist too. What I do is I would pose the arm myself and just measure the heights loosely.
...although you got the elbow part right so I believe it's because the upper torso area is slightly too long.
One more thing, her right breast (her right) should either be shown past her arm underneath or the left breast (her left) should be smaller, because right now it looks like the right breast is about half the size of the left one.
Oooh wait just one more hahaha. So her tail is full if fur I'm assuming, but there are only a few tufts that are sticking out and their length compared to the black and white transition don't exactly match, it'd be cooler if you'd be able to make them look more similar I believe, and maybe add more bits sticking out especially near the head, or if the head is smooth skin/scales/whatever then signify that by shading or some lined detailing.
Anywhooo!!! Yes this is pretty interesting hehe, what I'd the story behind this I wonder? I like the contrast of the expressions and it seems like her tail is quite a bothersome thing looking at her face and how it's just drooling over the ball. I also like that curl at the end of the mouth, it's a cute touch!!
>w< very nice image Pita!!
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