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So far the only page of the comic I've favorited. Reminds me of the family I never got to see cause they're dying off due to some form of cancer, and I'm hundreds of miles away from them to even see them for the first time. It frankly pisses me off when I have to go to a funeral for someone I NEVER KNEW.
Eh, kind of?
Spoiled usually means not fully understanding someone else's position outside of your view. That means, if someone is hurt, the spoiled one might not understand the pain they are going through and treat them as he feels right now. That usually means not aware of their limits as well.
With that said, Prince's actions so far weren't directly affecting Battu's job, so you can't say his behavior is detrimental to her, which is usually attributed to spoiled individuals. Also, just because one is spoiled, does not mean they are unthankfull as a person, they could still treasure meaningful things.
With that said, this may mean that maybe you were not given enough evidence that he is "spoiled" considering her reaction? Sometimes it is for this reason "Show, Don't Tell" rule exists...
I feel like I am rambling.
Spoiled usually means not fully understanding someone else's position outside of your view. That means, if someone is hurt, the spoiled one might not understand the pain they are going through and treat them as he feels right now. That usually means not aware of their limits as well.
With that said, Prince's actions so far weren't directly affecting Battu's job, so you can't say his behavior is detrimental to her, which is usually attributed to spoiled individuals. Also, just because one is spoiled, does not mean they are unthankfull as a person, they could still treasure meaningful things.
With that said, this may mean that maybe you were not given enough evidence that he is "spoiled" considering her reaction? Sometimes it is for this reason "Show, Don't Tell" rule exists...
I feel like I am rambling.
Agreed. A family like this is not a real family. I can understand where Battu (and even a royal family) could be coming from, but that village he was in was more of a family than one that sends mercenaries willing to break bones to collect him.
Also How does Battu know what a chicken is? Are there space hens floating around out there? Do they lay green eggs? Why am I suddenly craving ham…?
Also How does Battu know what a chicken is? Are there space hens floating around out there? Do they lay green eggs? Why am I suddenly craving ham…?
Honestly, I'm gonna play devil's advocate here and say DC's Robin was right when he said it in a particular scene: "Your problems are worse than anyone else's, because they're yours."
"Nice problem to have" is a really shitty thing to say to anyone and shows a huge lack of empathy.
"Nice problem to have" is a really shitty thing to say to anyone and shows a huge lack of empathy.
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