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Itadakimasu might be Japanese and not Chinese, but I still think it fits well enough XD
Honey-laurel17 on DA was having a contest where you submitted artwork based around China so I thought I'd give it a go :D
Honey is supposed to be in a kimono but you can't see the belt because of the long sleeves.
The other two characters are my own main two ladies in my own gallery and the three of them are having a nice Chinese meal together on a grassy field...and yes I need to work on my backgrounds more XD
Hope you like it ^^
:Edit: Now with a better looking table ^^
Honey-laurel17 on DA was having a contest where you submitted artwork based around China so I thought I'd give it a go :D
Honey is supposed to be in a kimono but you can't see the belt because of the long sleeves.
The other two characters are my own main two ladies in my own gallery and the three of them are having a nice Chinese meal together on a grassy field...and yes I need to work on my backgrounds more XD
Hope you like it ^^
:Edit: Now with a better looking table ^^
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six of one, half dozen of the other. Each lass seems to be sitting up straight. But the table isn't in a position for them to be interacting with it quite right. On the left, the leg of the table is clearly... uh, North of the knee. So if her arm is straight in front of her, the mug is not above the table. Nothing really wrong with that. Her bowl and other stuff could be hidden by the glass, but why would she be facing at that angle?
On the right, well, both arms extend equal dist to the left, although one seems to be passing a cup to the girl in the rear, and the other is holding a ball of rice... above the corner of the table, if my geometry is correct. And with bent arm. Her bent lower arm seems about as long as the lady opposite's entire extended arm.
So, perspective issues all around, but mostly mild ones, and mostly only obvious in relation to the other elements. Each figure seems okay separately. So, yanno, it's about what you expect, errors in perspective cropping up with multiple elements in the scene. *shrugs* Correcting for it, I'd suggest references. Like, photo refs, and whatnot. Also, the art exercises that involve the vanishing point.
Hope that helps you out more than it annoys you. ^^;
On the right, well, both arms extend equal dist to the left, although one seems to be passing a cup to the girl in the rear, and the other is holding a ball of rice... above the corner of the table, if my geometry is correct. And with bent arm. Her bent lower arm seems about as long as the lady opposite's entire extended arm.
So, perspective issues all around, but mostly mild ones, and mostly only obvious in relation to the other elements. Each figure seems okay separately. So, yanno, it's about what you expect, errors in perspective cropping up with multiple elements in the scene. *shrugs* Correcting for it, I'd suggest references. Like, photo refs, and whatnot. Also, the art exercises that involve the vanishing point.
Hope that helps you out more than it annoys you. ^^;
Yeah a reference picture woulda been nice but I did this one off the top of my head.
Plus they're supposed to be raising their cups in a "cheers" kinda fashion for the fun party they're having, nobody passing anything to anyone else. Crystal did come out a little weird in her positioning, but she's supposed to be sitting at the bottom corner of the table, not directly behind her dinner mat.
Plus constructive criticism is always welcome :D Can't mature as an artist without it and it's better then posting an artwork and having nobody comment on it at all XD
Plus they're supposed to be raising their cups in a "cheers" kinda fashion for the fun party they're having, nobody passing anything to anyone else. Crystal did come out a little weird in her positioning, but she's supposed to be sitting at the bottom corner of the table, not directly behind her dinner mat.
Plus constructive criticism is always welcome :D Can't mature as an artist without it and it's better then posting an artwork and having nobody comment on it at all XD
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