There was a chapter 3 at one point, but it's dead now because I didn't like it.
We now return to your regularly scheduled plotless fluff
One Day, Cam and Devin were having a play date. They were downstairs and were wrestling, each trying to pin the other to the carpet. Without hurting each other, of course!
Despite Devin deciding to go easy on Cam, due to being the larger of the pair, they had eventually managed to get Cam on their back and was now sitting on them.
Cam tried to push Devin off, but their friend was too heavy, and they eventually just laid down in defeat. “Alright, I give, you win,” they said, smiling despite their loss.
“Sheesh, I was even going easy on you! You’re pretty bad at this,” Devin said, looking behind them to see Cam face. They turned their head back and was about to get off of Cam, but then they saw Cam’s feet, and a thought popped into their head.
At first, they thought it would be too mean, but it was still a very appealing idea.
“Hey, why’re you still sitting on me?” Cam asked, laughing a bit at their friend’s reluctance to let them go.
Devin smiled to themself, made up their mind, and replied, “To do this!” and started tickling Cam’s bare feet. This caught Cam completely off guard, and they immediately erupted into laughter.
“What are you doing!?” Cam managed to say through their laughter.
“I’m sorry Cam,” Devin said with a smile, “I saw your feet, and the temptation was too much!” Though they said they were sorry, they kept tickling Cam, enjoying the sound of their best friend’s laughter.
“I’ll get you back for this, ya jerk,” Cam swore through their laughter, as an idea popped into their head. “Then we’ll see who gets the last laugh!”
“Yeah righ- wait a sec.” Devin paused their tickling. “Who would get the last laHAHAHA!”
They were suddenly interrupted as Cam took advantage of their confusion to sit up behind Devin and start tickling their ribs, shouting “You!” in response to their question and sending them into uncontrollable laughter.
“No fair!” Devin said through the laughter as they were subjected to a hefty dose of karma.
“Heh, gotta take what you give, bud!”
The pair’s battle began anew, as they fought to tickle the other and avoid being tickled, though neither was really any good at the ‘avoid being tickled’ part. Neither ever really liked tickling much when they were younger, but as they played, they didn’t find themselves very eager to escape the other’s tickles, except to become the tickler again. The sound of childish laughter filled the room, and perhaps even the entire house, and though neither wanted to admit it even to themselves at first, they were both enjoying being tickled just as much as they enjoyed tickling the other.
As it went on, and they both grew tired, Cam managed to pin Devin on the ground the same way Devin had them before, and as they tickled Devin’s feet, Devin just gave up trying to escape, and they laid on the floor, tired, laughing, and happy.
“I told you I'd get you back.” Cam said, tiredly boasting as they finally stopped tickling Devin.
“Yeah... you did.” Devin said after catching their breath. “No hard feelings?”
“Of course.” Cam got up and tried to help Devin to their feet, but Devin was too heavy for them in their tired state, and they ended up falling onto them instead.
The 2 were silent for a moment, then they started laughing, then they found it funny that they were laughing again, and that made them laugh more. They just laid there for a while, laughing for some time, then after they stopped, they just sat there, enjoying each other’s company...
This was my first time really writing tickling, and I know I did it differently from how most write it, but I'm definitely satisfied with it. Anything you think could have been done better, though? Please, tell me in the comments!
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We now return to your regularly scheduled plotless fluff
One Day, Cam and Devin were having a play date. They were downstairs and were wrestling, each trying to pin the other to the carpet. Without hurting each other, of course!
Despite Devin deciding to go easy on Cam, due to being the larger of the pair, they had eventually managed to get Cam on their back and was now sitting on them.
Cam tried to push Devin off, but their friend was too heavy, and they eventually just laid down in defeat. “Alright, I give, you win,” they said, smiling despite their loss.
“Sheesh, I was even going easy on you! You’re pretty bad at this,” Devin said, looking behind them to see Cam face. They turned their head back and was about to get off of Cam, but then they saw Cam’s feet, and a thought popped into their head.
At first, they thought it would be too mean, but it was still a very appealing idea.
“Hey, why’re you still sitting on me?” Cam asked, laughing a bit at their friend’s reluctance to let them go.
Devin smiled to themself, made up their mind, and replied, “To do this!” and started tickling Cam’s bare feet. This caught Cam completely off guard, and they immediately erupted into laughter.
“What are you doing!?” Cam managed to say through their laughter.
“I’m sorry Cam,” Devin said with a smile, “I saw your feet, and the temptation was too much!” Though they said they were sorry, they kept tickling Cam, enjoying the sound of their best friend’s laughter.
“I’ll get you back for this, ya jerk,” Cam swore through their laughter, as an idea popped into their head. “Then we’ll see who gets the last laugh!”
“Yeah righ- wait a sec.” Devin paused their tickling. “Who would get the last laHAHAHA!”
They were suddenly interrupted as Cam took advantage of their confusion to sit up behind Devin and start tickling their ribs, shouting “You!” in response to their question and sending them into uncontrollable laughter.
“No fair!” Devin said through the laughter as they were subjected to a hefty dose of karma.
“Heh, gotta take what you give, bud!”
The pair’s battle began anew, as they fought to tickle the other and avoid being tickled, though neither was really any good at the ‘avoid being tickled’ part. Neither ever really liked tickling much when they were younger, but as they played, they didn’t find themselves very eager to escape the other’s tickles, except to become the tickler again. The sound of childish laughter filled the room, and perhaps even the entire house, and though neither wanted to admit it even to themselves at first, they were both enjoying being tickled just as much as they enjoyed tickling the other.
As it went on, and they both grew tired, Cam managed to pin Devin on the ground the same way Devin had them before, and as they tickled Devin’s feet, Devin just gave up trying to escape, and they laid on the floor, tired, laughing, and happy.
“I told you I'd get you back.” Cam said, tiredly boasting as they finally stopped tickling Devin.
“Yeah... you did.” Devin said after catching their breath. “No hard feelings?”
“Of course.” Cam got up and tried to help Devin to their feet, but Devin was too heavy for them in their tired state, and they ended up falling onto them instead.
The 2 were silent for a moment, then they started laughing, then they found it funny that they were laughing again, and that made them laugh more. They just laid there for a while, laughing for some time, then after they stopped, they just sat there, enjoying each other’s company...
This was my first time really writing tickling, and I know I did it differently from how most write it, but I'm definitely satisfied with it. Anything you think could have been done better, though? Please, tell me in the comments!
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