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Since most of you guys can't view my story why not i make it here for you guys. Anyway, This is a remastered version of my tale with no characters and no absolute crap. If you want to read the whole story, Do check out my Deviantart page as I try to upload a new episode from Monday to friday. Anyways, I hope you enjoy.
I dedicate this episode to https://www.furaffinity.net/user/unrealplace/ Who has some of the most unique art I've ever seen (Oh and because of his OC's Underwear collection)
And just because, Here is the whole script which I wrote myself:
EPISODE 4: THE ULTIMATE TEST
Raier Is busy training. He still needs to polish his skills when it comes to controlling his gunpla. No one knows exactly where he went But he left a letter to Bonnie telling him that he will be unavailable for two days. He begins by doing warm up routines like Push ups, Stretches and Basic tai chi. He then continues with mix of karate and kung fu training followed by Staff fighting training and Acrobatics. It may not be the most intense training of his life but its a way to get the blood pumping. When he was done, Raier began to make it back to his house when he received a letter. It was a challenge invitation to the ultimate test.
"The ultimate test they say? Alright I'll do it"
Raier then changed course and headed to matsumoto's castle, The said location for this so called test. When he finally got there, He saw no one and wondered if he was tricked or decieved.
"Hello. I'm Here in person. You wanted me to accomplish the ultimate test right? Well come on! I have a tournament to prepare for"
He then heard a voice behind him breaking the silence.
"How Flattering that you showed up. I guess he was right. You don't back down from a challenge do you?"
"Who are you? Show yourself!"
The figure slowly emerge from the shadows. It resembled a black cat wearing a yellow headband and a Blue scarf. He was also in a blue and yellow shorts. In a surprise manner, Raier immediately knew who it was.
"Klay? what are you doing here?"
"Helping you train duh. You wanted to become strong for the tournament so I decided to help you out"
"Well I'm glad you're here. So shall we spar or play a little tag?"
"Nope. This time we do something different"
"And that would be?"
Klay then took out his pre built Sengoku astray from his pocket and showed it to raier.
"Wait.. Are we seriously going to do that?"
"Yep. Raier I challenge you to a Gunpla Battle The winner takes A gunpla of their choice. The loser has to pay for the Winner's Gunpla. do you accept?"
Raier thought for a brief moment and decided that the was accepted.
"Klay, I accept your challenge!"
"Excellent! Follow me"
Klay led Raier to a gunpla shop outside Matsumoto. There they found the last of the Cyber world 3 gunpla battle machines. It was old but still functions well.
"So, Are you ready?"
"Well Uh you see my gunpla is left at my place and i dont have one at the moment."
"What a pity. Fine you can use mine"
He handed Raier A shining gundam that has no custom no paint nothing. Just a straight up build.
"You expect me to battle you with this?"
"What its all i have Ok. Now let's duel"
And with these words uttered, The rivals begin their battle.
"KLAY: GUNDAM SENGOKU ASTRAY RED FLAME"
"RAIER: SHINING GUNDAM. LET'S GO!"
The Robots ended up in a Big temple arena, With the moon White as roses and sky as red as blood. Their battle was about to begin.
"I could asure you that you will you lose" Klay confidently to Raier.
"Not if i beat you here. LETS DO THIS. SHINING!"
the Astray Drew one of its swords out to slice Shining but with Raier's quick thinking and acrobatic training, He Maneuvered his Gunpla out of the way and gets ready to counter attack.
"Take This. SHINING FINGER!!!"
The attack connected and the astray's face was merely damaged.
"HUH... You're smarter than i thought. But can you dodge this?"
The astray then pulled another sword and quickly slashed the shining but it missed. That's when Raier knew it was a distraction and the astray finally grabbed its other sword. The astray then countered with a swift right slash and it sliced off one of shining's arms. Then the astray began to charge as if its ready for a final Attack.
"Prepare yourself. This is my trump card"
Klay commanded the astray to raise the two swords up high and it began to spark in flames. Soon it was aimed at the helpless Shining not knowing what to do.
"Say your prayers Raier!! DUAL SWORD SLASH: INFERNO TORNADO!!!"
The astray began to spin like a top and sliced downed the Shining, Its blades beating on the helpless gundam. Most of the shining is still intact but it cannot continue after the attack.
"Looks like the Tiger just met its match. I guess I won this battle"
But after a moment of silence, Klay was caught in surprise as the shining is still standing.
"But How? No on can witstand that attack"
"Don't under estimate your Opponent as they say. With this gundam by my side i cant lose. And now you will see my true power LETS GO SHINING!!!!"
The shining then revealed its true face. Its faceplate splitting into two to reveal a red mouth piece. It also released more fins different from the rest of its helmet. Soon the shining began to glow gold with its left hand glowing green.
As soon as the shining is powering up, A mark appeared on Raier's left paw. It was the king of hearts logo Domon used as his symbol of hope. This could only mean one thing. Raier's sensei telling him about the mark that will cleanse the world of evil was true all along. With this in mind He prepared for his ultimate attack.
"Now Klay. You will know exactly why I'm here. I want to win but I also want to show you the results of my training. I wanted to prove to everyone that I can do what my sensei believed in: To break my limits and be free! This is my power. The power of me and my shining!!"
"MY HAND GROWS WITH INTENSE POWER. ITS LOUD ROAR TELLING ME TO DEFEAT YOU!!"
"LOOK AT THIS!! ALL THE COURAGE! STRENGTH! HOPE! AND DETERMINATION OF ALL MY FRIENDS!! THEY'RE THE REASON WHY I MADE IT THIS FAR. AND IT IS THE REASON WHY I WILL DEFEAT YOU!!"
"TAKE THIS!!! SHINING FINGER SWORD!!!!!!!"
The shining then raised its hand like a sword and slashed the astray. The power of the attack completely shattered the ground and ripped the earth. The astray tried to block it with its two swords and remaining strength but due to the immense power, It was no match for it. The shining ripped the Astray in two and with a dynamic explosion the astray was no more. The shining gundam won the match.
"My Beautiful astray! AWW.. I was gonna enter that in the tournament."
"Don't worry Klay. Here i got you spare change"
"Thanks. Anyway since you won you can pick from any Gunpla you want. Go on pick your choice"
Raier then looked at an exia gundam and thought it was cheap for Klay to pay.
"I pick that one"
"The Exia? But you only pick Fighting type gundams"
"I know. But that one looks promising"
"Okay.. Sure I'll buy that one for you, But do you have plans for it?"
"OH Yes. But it will be used in a future time"
When they were done, Raier headed off home enjoying the sunset along the way. He wondered if there will be more challenges in the upcoming qualifier, But he will just have to wait and see.
I dedicate this episode to https://www.furaffinity.net/user/unrealplace/ Who has some of the most unique art I've ever seen (Oh and because of his OC's Underwear collection)
And just because, Here is the whole script which I wrote myself:
EPISODE 4: THE ULTIMATE TEST
Raier Is busy training. He still needs to polish his skills when it comes to controlling his gunpla. No one knows exactly where he went But he left a letter to Bonnie telling him that he will be unavailable for two days. He begins by doing warm up routines like Push ups, Stretches and Basic tai chi. He then continues with mix of karate and kung fu training followed by Staff fighting training and Acrobatics. It may not be the most intense training of his life but its a way to get the blood pumping. When he was done, Raier began to make it back to his house when he received a letter. It was a challenge invitation to the ultimate test.
"The ultimate test they say? Alright I'll do it"
Raier then changed course and headed to matsumoto's castle, The said location for this so called test. When he finally got there, He saw no one and wondered if he was tricked or decieved.
"Hello. I'm Here in person. You wanted me to accomplish the ultimate test right? Well come on! I have a tournament to prepare for"
He then heard a voice behind him breaking the silence.
"How Flattering that you showed up. I guess he was right. You don't back down from a challenge do you?"
"Who are you? Show yourself!"
The figure slowly emerge from the shadows. It resembled a black cat wearing a yellow headband and a Blue scarf. He was also in a blue and yellow shorts. In a surprise manner, Raier immediately knew who it was.
"Klay? what are you doing here?"
"Helping you train duh. You wanted to become strong for the tournament so I decided to help you out"
"Well I'm glad you're here. So shall we spar or play a little tag?"
"Nope. This time we do something different"
"And that would be?"
Klay then took out his pre built Sengoku astray from his pocket and showed it to raier.
"Wait.. Are we seriously going to do that?"
"Yep. Raier I challenge you to a Gunpla Battle The winner takes A gunpla of their choice. The loser has to pay for the Winner's Gunpla. do you accept?"
Raier thought for a brief moment and decided that the was accepted.
"Klay, I accept your challenge!"
"Excellent! Follow me"
Klay led Raier to a gunpla shop outside Matsumoto. There they found the last of the Cyber world 3 gunpla battle machines. It was old but still functions well.
"So, Are you ready?"
"Well Uh you see my gunpla is left at my place and i dont have one at the moment."
"What a pity. Fine you can use mine"
He handed Raier A shining gundam that has no custom no paint nothing. Just a straight up build.
"You expect me to battle you with this?"
"What its all i have Ok. Now let's duel"
And with these words uttered, The rivals begin their battle.
"KLAY: GUNDAM SENGOKU ASTRAY RED FLAME"
"RAIER: SHINING GUNDAM. LET'S GO!"
The Robots ended up in a Big temple arena, With the moon White as roses and sky as red as blood. Their battle was about to begin.
"I could asure you that you will you lose" Klay confidently to Raier.
"Not if i beat you here. LETS DO THIS. SHINING!"
the Astray Drew one of its swords out to slice Shining but with Raier's quick thinking and acrobatic training, He Maneuvered his Gunpla out of the way and gets ready to counter attack.
"Take This. SHINING FINGER!!!"
The attack connected and the astray's face was merely damaged.
"HUH... You're smarter than i thought. But can you dodge this?"
The astray then pulled another sword and quickly slashed the shining but it missed. That's when Raier knew it was a distraction and the astray finally grabbed its other sword. The astray then countered with a swift right slash and it sliced off one of shining's arms. Then the astray began to charge as if its ready for a final Attack.
"Prepare yourself. This is my trump card"
Klay commanded the astray to raise the two swords up high and it began to spark in flames. Soon it was aimed at the helpless Shining not knowing what to do.
"Say your prayers Raier!! DUAL SWORD SLASH: INFERNO TORNADO!!!"
The astray began to spin like a top and sliced downed the Shining, Its blades beating on the helpless gundam. Most of the shining is still intact but it cannot continue after the attack.
"Looks like the Tiger just met its match. I guess I won this battle"
But after a moment of silence, Klay was caught in surprise as the shining is still standing.
"But How? No on can witstand that attack"
"Don't under estimate your Opponent as they say. With this gundam by my side i cant lose. And now you will see my true power LETS GO SHINING!!!!"
The shining then revealed its true face. Its faceplate splitting into two to reveal a red mouth piece. It also released more fins different from the rest of its helmet. Soon the shining began to glow gold with its left hand glowing green.
As soon as the shining is powering up, A mark appeared on Raier's left paw. It was the king of hearts logo Domon used as his symbol of hope. This could only mean one thing. Raier's sensei telling him about the mark that will cleanse the world of evil was true all along. With this in mind He prepared for his ultimate attack.
"Now Klay. You will know exactly why I'm here. I want to win but I also want to show you the results of my training. I wanted to prove to everyone that I can do what my sensei believed in: To break my limits and be free! This is my power. The power of me and my shining!!"
"MY HAND GROWS WITH INTENSE POWER. ITS LOUD ROAR TELLING ME TO DEFEAT YOU!!"
"LOOK AT THIS!! ALL THE COURAGE! STRENGTH! HOPE! AND DETERMINATION OF ALL MY FRIENDS!! THEY'RE THE REASON WHY I MADE IT THIS FAR. AND IT IS THE REASON WHY I WILL DEFEAT YOU!!"
"TAKE THIS!!! SHINING FINGER SWORD!!!!!!!"
The shining then raised its hand like a sword and slashed the astray. The power of the attack completely shattered the ground and ripped the earth. The astray tried to block it with its two swords and remaining strength but due to the immense power, It was no match for it. The shining ripped the Astray in two and with a dynamic explosion the astray was no more. The shining gundam won the match.
"My Beautiful astray! AWW.. I was gonna enter that in the tournament."
"Don't worry Klay. Here i got you spare change"
"Thanks. Anyway since you won you can pick from any Gunpla you want. Go on pick your choice"
Raier then looked at an exia gundam and thought it was cheap for Klay to pay.
"I pick that one"
"The Exia? But you only pick Fighting type gundams"
"I know. But that one looks promising"
"Okay.. Sure I'll buy that one for you, But do you have plans for it?"
"OH Yes. But it will be used in a future time"
When they were done, Raier headed off home enjoying the sunset along the way. He wondered if there will be more challenges in the upcoming qualifier, But he will just have to wait and see.
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