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Hello, everyone!
spelunkersal here.
So what can I say about this new arc? Well, this is more or less starting from where we left off at the end of Arc 1 (for those of you new to Roommates, you can start here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2224200/ ), but it's a couple months down the road from where they were last. So, it's safe to say they're into the new school year a fair bit.
Anyway, their story continues. Our main goal is unchanged, which is just to convey somewhat real-life situations that a gay couple can be found in (with more kinky stuff thrown in sometimes!). It's a sort of "little slice of life" story. :)
So, on Jr's and Gian's adventure today, we find Jr. taking Gian to a locally owned Tattoo + Piercing parlor! What has Jr. talked Gian into getting? A tattoo? A piercing? And where??? :O Guess you'll have to find out in the next page. ;) Oh, and since he was a runner-up in our recent contest,
fatalglory128 makes a small cameo appearance in this page as a waiter. As you can see,
dreamous and myself make a cameo on this page too. :B
flarestarfire and
juano are going to be in the next few pages. ^^
Story by:
dreamous
Art by:
spelunkersal
Created and Conceptualized by:

Characters herein © to Nintendo, Namco-Bandai/Toei, and their respective owners.
These are My Reflections (Jr's past, side-story): http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2287685
by:
Arc 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2224200/
Arc 2:
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Hello, everyone!
spelunkersal here.So what can I say about this new arc? Well, this is more or less starting from where we left off at the end of Arc 1 (for those of you new to Roommates, you can start here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2224200/ ), but it's a couple months down the road from where they were last. So, it's safe to say they're into the new school year a fair bit.
Anyway, their story continues. Our main goal is unchanged, which is just to convey somewhat real-life situations that a gay couple can be found in (with more kinky stuff thrown in sometimes!). It's a sort of "little slice of life" story. :)
So, on Jr's and Gian's adventure today, we find Jr. taking Gian to a locally owned Tattoo + Piercing parlor! What has Jr. talked Gian into getting? A tattoo? A piercing? And where??? :O Guess you'll have to find out in the next page. ;) Oh, and since he was a runner-up in our recent contest,
fatalglory128 makes a small cameo appearance in this page as a waiter. As you can see,
dreamous and myself make a cameo on this page too. :B
flarestarfire and
juano are going to be in the next few pages. ^^Story by:
dreamousArt by:
spelunkersalCreated and Conceptualized by:


Characters herein © to Nintendo, Namco-Bandai/Toei, and their respective owners.
These are My Reflections (Jr's past, side-story): http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2287685
by:

Arc 1: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2224200/
Arc 2:
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First: YAY, new comic!! I absolutely loved the first Arc and can't wait to see this one and all the things that'll happen.
Second: You look cool with long hair (first time or so I've seen your Fursona though, maybe 2th time, can't remember all that well)
Third: I didn't know there was a contest...will there be more contests? *has a curious look in his eyes*
Second: You look cool with long hair (first time or so I've seen your Fursona though, maybe 2th time, can't remember all that well)
Third: I didn't know there was a contest...will there be more contests? *has a curious look in his eyes*
In my honest opinion its a turn-off for me if he gets a pierced, a tattoo would be okay (have bad experience about getting pierced) XD but im really looking forward to this arc i remember the start or arc 1 it was starting in a locker- room (lots of naughty thaughts how this would end up, bu to my surprise it was going in a complete different way i think you are planning something sililar this time again or ????) (sorry for my bad english)
Look through the gallery to find what you need. Here's page 1 of Arc 1. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2224200/
I'm very sure, most people already spotted that out...... but YOU ARE THERE in the background, too!!!! XD *grins*
Anyway, I really like this idea. Also, to add people/friends there (for money or free, no matter) is a great idea and fun!
About the page:
It's way more detailed and masterfully inked/coloured this time. You are pretty great about drawing "casual positions and movements". I mean... just 2 guys walking along the street... getting into a store... such things. No "Power-Ranger-Posing"! No "Ulra-Fuck-Sex-Kamasutra-Positions"!!! :D Just normal people!!!!!! That's interesting and it immediately throws the reader into the story.
Yes. The watcher is a part of the story within seconds.
The only panel, which is sorta "off" or looking weird is "panel #3"! Mostly, because Gian and Jr. are not casting a shadow on the street. Thus, they appear like in an old and very crazy video game... (bouncing 2D sprites)!
Since you are so good on colours, poses, angles and more... I highly suggest, you add at least a small shadow below your characters!! It is important, or they figures just fly around.
Last panel proves it again! >.<
Consider this idea, please. ^..^ Keep it up!!!
Anyway, I really like this idea. Also, to add people/friends there (for money or free, no matter) is a great idea and fun!
About the page:
It's way more detailed and masterfully inked/coloured this time. You are pretty great about drawing "casual positions and movements". I mean... just 2 guys walking along the street... getting into a store... such things. No "Power-Ranger-Posing"! No "Ulra-Fuck-Sex-Kamasutra-Positions"!!! :D Just normal people!!!!!! That's interesting and it immediately throws the reader into the story.
Yes. The watcher is a part of the story within seconds.
The only panel, which is sorta "off" or looking weird is "panel #3"! Mostly, because Gian and Jr. are not casting a shadow on the street. Thus, they appear like in an old and very crazy video game... (bouncing 2D sprites)!
Since you are so good on colours, poses, angles and more... I highly suggest, you add at least a small shadow below your characters!! It is important, or they figures just fly around.
Last panel proves it again! >.<
Consider this idea, please. ^..^ Keep it up!!!
Awe You and dreamous Look so cute together. i wish i cn hav u do me and my beloved. But i hav no money to spare thanks to stupid econemy. I love your comic and i hope for more. And i saw on the journal that you and dreamous got married. Congrats you two! Even though im straight idm gay couples. i think its adorable to see the tender and cute side of men. So i hope you both are happy. And could you pray for me and my sweetheart? we r far apart thanks to our families and we really want to b together and married. So please pray for us.
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