Well... I dunno about you, but I don't think I'd trust anyone who looked like that ^^;

What'chu talkin' bout? He's smiling! That's clearly a sign that he will offer only hugs and lollipops to the kid.

I wouldn't be surprised if the lollipops had Arsenic inside them XD

Id say more on the edge of chloroform

General consensus would be to not take anything from the guy, period then :P

Never trust someone that can do the "white-anime-glasses" thing.

Well, in young Battu's defense, he is blind... Can't really see what he looks like... I'm trying to say this without looking like a douche.

That's very true, no worries. I was just saying it in the case of if you COULD see him, but given he can't, it's all fair, so no worries :)

I don’t trust sadists and mad scientists...don’t bother asking me about sadistic mad scientists :-P

The universe is full of some right cunts o.O

WHAT. THE. FUCK. IS. THAT. HAIRCUT? BOI

IF HE DON'T GET OUT OF HERE WITH THAT GEORGE JEFFERSON HAIRLINE LOOKING ASS BOI👏🏿

Okay evil scientist. don't notice the dot. *looks down my sniper rifle.*

this is sus for sure because why take children and enhancing them

Then he turn him into Battu. XD

Oh man, do we get to meet the other kids here?
Ohhhhh man, what if they're super-experiments too!
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAN, hype super experiment battles!

That guy feels soooo much like a One Piece character
I love that bastard

das a pretty cool lookin antagonist.

OH! That's why the parent's faces can't be remembered but these assholes can!

I just imagine "typical cartoony german accent" for this scientist guy.

Battu vs Stitch

So who would win in a brawl?

battu

Stitch

Ah, so Battu had his consciousness transfered into his current body... and was a guy before... Yeah, that sounds like something you'd do Gill

Not a fan of the dialogue in that last frame. Way too heavy, too dense, I don't buy that any character would talk like that. Not sure if there's any chance for editing at this point, nor do I expect you to randomly listen to a stranger, but surely it'd be better if you cut out at the simple implication of "you wont have to worry about that where you're going, I'll give you some wonderful new ones." Plenty of room down the line to slip the other details in more organically.

What kind of self-respecting mad scientist doesn't monologue his plans out loud to the protagonist?

In all seriousness, he's as much talking to himself, musing about the suitability of his subject and the 'improvements' he thinks he can make to it.

I could see it working, but it really needs to be split up into multiple frames somehow.

You're also missing the point of the panel a bit. The 'punchline', as it were, is in the rhetorical question he puts to his captive after delivering that grandiose statement; he doesn't get an answer, nor does he expect one, because it's clear the child doesn't have the faintest idea what he's talking about, and is too frightened to answer anyway.

Don't worry I listen to all criticism and take consideration with what you said. Yeah I agree. I may need to fix this and split the bubbles up. I wouldn't be a fan of large bubbles my self. So thabk you for yoyr thought pass more in the future if you feel up to it. It's what this comment section is for. <3

All of it being smushed into one bubble like that reminds me of intelligent characters in shows that just ramble on and on real fast because they cannot help but keep talking, before their brain finally hits that off switch and they move on.

Yeah, I think it's more an issue of a lot of text being loaded into a single word bubble then there being a lot of text. But then, I prefer the manga approach to framing, where there is less dialogue and more meaning conveyed through action and expression (and too be fair, there are plenty of manga that go waaaaaay too far in the other direction, to where it just becomes a chore to figure out what's going on). But sometimes a character is just the type to talk, in which case it would be better to arrange the pages so that you can divide long stretches of text across multiple panels.
But that's one of those things that you gotta also work out alongside pacing, layout across multiple pages and storytelling efficiency and all of those things combined means you can't always do it the best way all of the time. I would say that yeah, this might have been better divided up if possible, but until I've seen the whole chapter, I don't think there's really a way to tell if that was possible in the moment.
Also, comics aren't my specialty, so my advice may or may not be useful. I'm just guessing based on what I've seen of the comics that managed to capture and hold my attention over an extended time frame (which is not many, to be honest).

Maybe the guy-creature-thing could be callously 'swinging' ***** around by his shirt/scruff as he gestures and paces about mad-scientist-like whilst 'wsxing poetically' on how great its gonna be?

Congrats. You created one creepy looking MoFo.

So we now know who's the mastermind upon the kidnappings of many children, and murder rate upon planets, and he wanted turn that innocent boy into a weapon, talk about a evil mad scientist.

did....did he just reference back to the future?

Oh goodness...that doesn't sound good.

"MuMu"? The KLF are coming? O_o

Space nazi!

wow

well with the issue of his "looks", cant say the kid can trust him on that people 9.9
have to go on about his voice and how he speaks to go off of first.

That man surely reminds me of heartbound x3 also if looks spooky XD

Okay, so from what I've already gathered, this crazy dude with the even crazier hair is basically Jumba Jookiba, if Jumba's morality was dialed down to 0 and his crazy was dialed up to 12, with NO chance of becoming good, ever! You know, I had a slight suspicion you were based on Stitch and the Experiments, but this basically confirms it. XD

I bet that guy turns that kid into Battu, seeing as how the kid was Battu's previous incarnation

ohhhhhh this cant be good

Mondo never look at Lemon Heads ever same 'gain.

This is quite a bit like One Piece, in a way.

Probably because of the extra words for laughing.

Nostalgia stab! It's Dr. Wily from space!

"And you'll also have a third eye."

How ugly this guy is...

So... does 'Muu' mean 'huh?'

blind too? geeze this kid can't catch a break can he?

also I can only imagine how weird it is having an extra sense jammed into you brain that you weren't born with, I think there was a movie based on a true story about that. I wonder what it would be like having an extra sense jammed in that the human brain was never designed to support, like a Jacobson organ or the starnose mole's emp; I wonder if you would have to alter the brain, or if the fleshy mass would just adapt to the strange new appendage were it simply added.

Muu? That's the boy's name?

Also, Muu sounds/is a play on Mew or Mewtwo from Pokemon.

Kid: I need an adult A Sane Adult