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I was sitting on my chair in my dragon form and was pregnant with 20 baby dragons inside my belly was huge like a beachball which reminded me of the characters from dragon tales pregnant in fan art as my belly was big, it wobbled and jiggled repeatedly as I rubbed my belly, Michelle rubbed it too to see me as her pregnant husband it's cute as you ask me, one day I was standing and my big pregnant belly wobbled and has my children moved around inside.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm glad I'm pregnant reminds me of the characters from dragon tales.
Michelle: Yes it does honey.
She nuzzled my pregnant belly and I smiled as she did that while I was wearing my baby blue speedos as it fit with me well during my pregnancy, we were like a mother, a father and their son or daughter sharing a bond together.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Thank you honey.
Michelle: You're welcome Ryan.
Then she kissed my pregnant belly 20 times for the baby dragons inside me, as I smiled as she did that and I rubbed my pregnant belly while Michelle nuzzled it happily and I enjoyed it as well as much Michelle did.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Thank you honey.
Michelle: You're welcome Ryan.
I smiled then we walked towards the cafeteria as my pregnant belly wobbled and jiggled repeatedly.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Awwwwwww.
Michelle smiled and was in the cafeteria and everyone were surprised to see me with a big pregnant belly.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I know what your all are thinking.
They smiled and standing in a queue to rub my pregnant belly everyone rubbed it and I enjoyed it, as they did it I hugged them and they hugged me back, I enjoyed it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Thank you that's very kind of you.
They smiled and I sit down having my food and Michelle placed her hand on my belly and she rubbed it and I purred like a dragon is enjoying it very much like a house pet too when their owner pets her or he they purred as they enjoy their owner doing that, Carlos our pet coyote was resting on my belly and using it as a bed I smiled and I petted him and he enjoyed it very much and I smiled as he did that, he stands in position for me or Michelle to gives him a belly rub and he enjoyed it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) He likes it honey.
Michelle: He does Ryan very much.
Carlos smiled and he curl up and went to sleep on my pregnant belly and I smiled as he did that then I petted him and he enjoyed it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Awwwwwww
Later I was posing and was looking down at my big pregnant belly and I smiled, enjoying the ways of pregnancy, it was amazing and cute though.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I like it very much, enjoying it very much too.
I was inside my office and resting on my couch while my big pregnant belly was comfortable and I rubbed it while the 20 baby dragons were resting inside my big pregnant belly.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure when they're born I'll make sure they'll be alright and me and Michelle will look after them well as our children.
Then I got up slowly and walked towards the window and looked out while my big pregnant belly pressed against the window I rubbed it too, my silver pregnant belly was pressed against the window and the shape of it was brilliant.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure Ludwig, will be having a nice time somewhere during his pregnancy he's one of my best friends also Ord etc. I'm sure they'll be alright I do care about my friends and they're my friends, being a dragon is awesome anyway, now to watch the sun over the sea it's beautiful.
Smiled and rubbed my silver pregnant belly and it was very nice.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure Ludwig will and the others will be happy to see me again soon.
Smiled and looked out through the window and it was a very nice view with the sun over the sea.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Such a beautiful view reminds me of Western Super Mare, it's a beautiful view though I have to say.
On my office desk was a box of chocolatey squares cereal that I have as a craving doing my pregnancy also as my breakfast too, I started to eat some and I enjoyed them, there was more boxes of the cereal inside in a cupboard in my office, I smiled as I felt the baby dragons moving inside my pregnant belly and I enjoyed it a lot.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Awwwwwww, you're welcome my kids.
Then I rubbed my pregnant belly and eating chocolatey squares cereal too, then our pet coyote Carlos came in as I sat on the couch and had a blanket too to keep me snuggled, Carlos jumped onto the couch and he licked my face and I hugged him and he enjoyed it, as soon we were comfortable we went to sleep I snuggle up to him like a puppy and cuddled him too he enjoyed it when he was a puppy and when he was scared me or Michelle went down and saw him scared so we decided to take him up stairs and to sleep with us like a child with his or her's Mom and Dad, we pet him also and he loved us very much, like a best friend to us our friendly coyote pet, as we felt throughout the hours Carlos got off the bed after he woke up and he smiled and licked my pregnant belly and I smiled as he did that, I petted him also he enjoyed it and when we do that he loves it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Your such a good boy Carlos.
Carlos smiled wagging his tail and he snuggled me while I got up and my pregnant belly wobbled and jiggled repeatedly then I walked towards the window and looked outside enjoying the nice view from my office.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure Ord, and the rest of the dragons are enjoying their pregnancy, I think it would be cute pressing my pregnant belly against maybe Ord's Zak's Quetzal's Wheezie's there's so many to name, still I'm enjoying my pregnancy.
Then I walked towards the door and walked out of my office and towards to sit on my deckchair, as I did so my pregnant belly wobbled and jiggled.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Nice to sit somewhere.
Then I relaxed on the deckchair and sat in the sun.
The End
I'm writing a story with me in my dragon form pregnant, you can draw me in my dragon form pregnant based on this story you can use this picture http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24425316/
Michelle, myself are owned by me.
I was sitting on my chair in my dragon form and was pregnant with 20 baby dragons inside my belly was huge like a beachball which reminded me of the characters from dragon tales pregnant in fan art as my belly was big, it wobbled and jiggled repeatedly as I rubbed my belly, Michelle rubbed it too to see me as her pregnant husband it's cute as you ask me, one day I was standing and my big pregnant belly wobbled and has my children moved around inside.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm glad I'm pregnant reminds me of the characters from dragon tales.
Michelle: Yes it does honey.
She nuzzled my pregnant belly and I smiled as she did that while I was wearing my baby blue speedos as it fit with me well during my pregnancy, we were like a mother, a father and their son or daughter sharing a bond together.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Thank you honey.
Michelle: You're welcome Ryan.
Then she kissed my pregnant belly 20 times for the baby dragons inside me, as I smiled as she did that and I rubbed my pregnant belly while Michelle nuzzled it happily and I enjoyed it as well as much Michelle did.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Thank you honey.
Michelle: You're welcome Ryan.
I smiled then we walked towards the cafeteria as my pregnant belly wobbled and jiggled repeatedly.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Awwwwwww.
Michelle smiled and was in the cafeteria and everyone were surprised to see me with a big pregnant belly.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I know what your all are thinking.
They smiled and standing in a queue to rub my pregnant belly everyone rubbed it and I enjoyed it, as they did it I hugged them and they hugged me back, I enjoyed it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Thank you that's very kind of you.
They smiled and I sit down having my food and Michelle placed her hand on my belly and she rubbed it and I purred like a dragon is enjoying it very much like a house pet too when their owner pets her or he they purred as they enjoy their owner doing that, Carlos our pet coyote was resting on my belly and using it as a bed I smiled and I petted him and he enjoyed it very much and I smiled as he did that, he stands in position for me or Michelle to gives him a belly rub and he enjoyed it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) He likes it honey.
Michelle: He does Ryan very much.
Carlos smiled and he curl up and went to sleep on my pregnant belly and I smiled as he did that then I petted him and he enjoyed it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Awwwwwww
Later I was posing and was looking down at my big pregnant belly and I smiled, enjoying the ways of pregnancy, it was amazing and cute though.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I like it very much, enjoying it very much too.
I was inside my office and resting on my couch while my big pregnant belly was comfortable and I rubbed it while the 20 baby dragons were resting inside my big pregnant belly.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure when they're born I'll make sure they'll be alright and me and Michelle will look after them well as our children.
Then I got up slowly and walked towards the window and looked out while my big pregnant belly pressed against the window I rubbed it too, my silver pregnant belly was pressed against the window and the shape of it was brilliant.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure Ludwig, will be having a nice time somewhere during his pregnancy he's one of my best friends also Ord etc. I'm sure they'll be alright I do care about my friends and they're my friends, being a dragon is awesome anyway, now to watch the sun over the sea it's beautiful.
Smiled and rubbed my silver pregnant belly and it was very nice.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure Ludwig will and the others will be happy to see me again soon.
Smiled and looked out through the window and it was a very nice view with the sun over the sea.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Such a beautiful view reminds me of Western Super Mare, it's a beautiful view though I have to say.
On my office desk was a box of chocolatey squares cereal that I have as a craving doing my pregnancy also as my breakfast too, I started to eat some and I enjoyed them, there was more boxes of the cereal inside in a cupboard in my office, I smiled as I felt the baby dragons moving inside my pregnant belly and I enjoyed it a lot.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Awwwwwww, you're welcome my kids.
Then I rubbed my pregnant belly and eating chocolatey squares cereal too, then our pet coyote Carlos came in as I sat on the couch and had a blanket too to keep me snuggled, Carlos jumped onto the couch and he licked my face and I hugged him and he enjoyed it, as soon we were comfortable we went to sleep I snuggle up to him like a puppy and cuddled him too he enjoyed it when he was a puppy and when he was scared me or Michelle went down and saw him scared so we decided to take him up stairs and to sleep with us like a child with his or her's Mom and Dad, we pet him also and he loved us very much, like a best friend to us our friendly coyote pet, as we felt throughout the hours Carlos got off the bed after he woke up and he smiled and licked my pregnant belly and I smiled as he did that, I petted him also he enjoyed it and when we do that he loves it very much.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Your such a good boy Carlos.
Carlos smiled wagging his tail and he snuggled me while I got up and my pregnant belly wobbled and jiggled repeatedly then I walked towards the window and looked outside enjoying the nice view from my office.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) I'm sure Ord, and the rest of the dragons are enjoying their pregnancy, I think it would be cute pressing my pregnant belly against maybe Ord's Zak's Quetzal's Wheezie's there's so many to name, still I'm enjoying my pregnancy.
Then I walked towards the door and walked out of my office and towards to sit on my deckchair, as I did so my pregnant belly wobbled and jiggled.
Me: (In my Dragon Form) Nice to sit somewhere.
Then I relaxed on the deckchair and sat in the sun.
The End
I'm writing a story with me in my dragon form pregnant, you can draw me in my dragon form pregnant based on this story you can use this picture http://www.furaffinity.net/view/24425316/
Michelle, myself are owned by me.
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Hey there. I'm a friend of 
DragoRyan6397 and he gave me a link to this story. Is it alright if I give a little bit of critiquing on this story?
DragoRyan6397 and he gave me a link to this story. Is it alright if I give a little bit of critiquing on this story?
Well... uh... For what genre it is, it definitely speaks for pregneancy ^^ it was kind of charming in itself and I ended up smiling in some parts.
No offense though, but there was quite a bit that could be improved. One major thing I saw right away was punctuation. You gotta find good places to put a period. Here's a small example of mine:
"There once was a man in a barn he liked this barn very very much in this barn he had some cows one was named Betty she was my favorite because I like to take her out on rides." <-- this sentence doesn't flow and needs breaks every now and then. Now, here's the Same sentence with correct punctuation:
"There once was a man in a barn. He liked this barn very, very much. In this barn, he had some Cows. One was named Betty. She was my favorite, because I like to take her out on rides." <--- this sentence has periods and commas to remind the reader to take a short breath and continue. Without punctuation, the long passage is really hard to read and understand, whereas with correct puntuation, the passage is easier to understand.
Keep in mind that I don't mean ANY offense at all. I'm just offering some constructive criticism. Does this make sense?
No offense though, but there was quite a bit that could be improved. One major thing I saw right away was punctuation. You gotta find good places to put a period. Here's a small example of mine:
"There once was a man in a barn he liked this barn very very much in this barn he had some cows one was named Betty she was my favorite because I like to take her out on rides." <-- this sentence doesn't flow and needs breaks every now and then. Now, here's the Same sentence with correct punctuation:
"There once was a man in a barn. He liked this barn very, very much. In this barn, he had some Cows. One was named Betty. She was my favorite, because I like to take her out on rides." <--- this sentence has periods and commas to remind the reader to take a short breath and continue. Without punctuation, the long passage is really hard to read and understand, whereas with correct puntuation, the passage is easier to understand.
Keep in mind that I don't mean ANY offense at all. I'm just offering some constructive criticism. Does this make sense?
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