Author's Note:
After much reflection, I have decided to remove The Fire Triangle from FurAffinity and rewrite it in a different form
This decision is based partially on some of the feedback I have received about the story, and partially on a number of things I've observed for myself.
After watching the Zootopia movie again and rereading what I had written so far, I came to realize the bunny and fox in The Fire Triangle are not Nick Wilde and Judy Hopps; they're two completely different characters with the same names. That needs to change; they need to get back in spirit with the animals we saw in the movie. I have also decided that the story would be better served written in the past rather than the present tense.
Last, and perhaps most significant, I went back and re-read some of the pre-Zootopia stories I had written about my OC Conor Lewis…and discovered, much to my dismay, that he too had morphed in a practically unrecognizable version of himself. (He was never a Mary Sue in his original incarnation.)
When your own character turns into someone you can't identify or even like all that much, it's time for a reboot.
I plan to do the rewrite in two stages. I have removed the Prologue but will leave Part 1 up until the full Prologue rewrite is posted. Then Part 1 will come down and gradually be reposted in a new version.
The first chapter of the rewritten prologue appears above.
After much reflection, I have decided to remove The Fire Triangle from FurAffinity and rewrite it in a different form
This decision is based partially on some of the feedback I have received about the story, and partially on a number of things I've observed for myself.
After watching the Zootopia movie again and rereading what I had written so far, I came to realize the bunny and fox in The Fire Triangle are not Nick Wilde and Judy Hopps; they're two completely different characters with the same names. That needs to change; they need to get back in spirit with the animals we saw in the movie. I have also decided that the story would be better served written in the past rather than the present tense.
Last, and perhaps most significant, I went back and re-read some of the pre-Zootopia stories I had written about my OC Conor Lewis…and discovered, much to my dismay, that he too had morphed in a practically unrecognizable version of himself. (He was never a Mary Sue in his original incarnation.)
When your own character turns into someone you can't identify or even like all that much, it's time for a reboot.
I plan to do the rewrite in two stages. I have removed the Prologue but will leave Part 1 up until the full Prologue rewrite is posted. Then Part 1 will come down and gradually be reposted in a new version.
The first chapter of the rewritten prologue appears above.
The Fire Triangle Overture
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oW72HQFk1Y0
Category Story / Fanart
Species Vulpine (Other)
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