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Ryouji and company learn the secrets of Yamakage and the link to the mysterious young women they've met on the road.

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Sorry for dangling this carrot for so long. :B But hey, it's done! Two or three episodes left until the end of season 1! :D

I'm actually not completely happy about this one. It's a little long, and some of the dialogue is patently goofy. If I were a little more consistent, I'd be pulling crap out left and right, but I'm sort of glossing over things that could potentially lead to awesomeness later.

Oh, the incantation Carmel uses is actually Irish. :B Points if you can translate (more if you can correct my grammar c.c I mean, I found an awesome dictionary, but who knows how good it is). The spell is inspired by the classic D&D spell Shillelagh, by which I mean that's where I ripped it off. I always liked that spell. :D

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