:X Please tell me Battu lines all these guys underpants with burning sulfer. Yes these guys are typical two dimensional corrupt prison staffers but your doing a good job of effectively making me want to see them get crunched by Battu.

Why do I feel like this is going to be a bunch of pre-edited crap on that stick.

would be a good bet, stuff that is false but makes Battu look crazy or homicidal...poor battu not getting a fair trial as it were

Wheres the space version of Phoenix Wright when you need him?

OBJECTION, DINKO!!

Does anyone else want beat the living F#%# out of that smug mother$^$? I bet that the prince should enter the room if I had any say in this and not only get her a pardon but demote all the bastards uinvolved in this thing and get that smug jerk a demotion so sevre he's only gonna get a job as a janitor at a feterlizer factory!!! Sorry, I just hate it when those who are supposed to keep the law in order are in truth the ones who need to be locked up, am I right people?

I get the feeling both the shark and Battu MIGHT have been...maybe hallucinating? They think one thing is going on, while another is happening? For example...Battu saw the shark attack her first. What if the shark saw Battu instigating, which led to a mutual brawl?

Deep.

And a perfect left turn for this plot to perform, I should say.

But it was an adrenal stimulant, adrenaline doesn't cause hallucinations.

As far as we know. Could have been anything.

Nooo!! Don't let him show the video! It is a trap! Poor Battu. ;n;

Huh. How did I not notice Battu was that bottom-heavy? Her hips are almost wider than her ears. She's looking cute in the fourth panel though.

battu THICC

cause you like all of us are too busy looking at her tail.

Funny thing is her shape has been consistent the whole comic, certain angles tend exaggerate her figure more.

#shawshank redemptions incoming

I think you mean shawshark.

word

please have a USB joke!

I like Hereafter Ceremony in place of Funeral. Helps give it a extraterrestrial spin on their society.

I small a set up

Explode this goddamned jail Battu,there doesn't Seems to be sign of any intelligent life forms.

Anyone else got the sinking feeling that this prison might not be run legitimately?

Yep...

what prison IS?

Was Battu sent here without a trial?

Also really hating this warden and his flunkies. I hope Battu either escapes or is set free when that Prince confirms that she saved him.

ITS A TRAP! \(•~•)/

I got a bad feeling about what's on that drive

Actually what I'm worried about is that...well..I realized that during the scene where the cafeteria worker was spraying the food with what ever that stuff was! It's actually rather unsure which one ate the food, Both Battu and Torp had the same tray with the same food, and while it may seem like Torp is the one that lost it, this could of been Battu in a delusional state of mind because of the drugs.

veeeeeery good point....but the drug was an adrenal stimulant. Adrenaline doesn't cause a hallucinations.

damn dude, good eye!

Aaaaand cue the doctored footage. :p

Somethings smell fishy
(Says the foxcoon in a space suit on the other side of the galaxy)

I sense a rigged footage coming, cause this warden is the type of shady characters that would do dirty stunts to ruin an innocent person's rep behind the scene while his workers carried out the orders.

Who else wants this guy to get locked up in The Pit?

its gonna be rigged for sure

I'm starting to hate this comic now. There's 3 main things I stick to, and one of them is being against bullying. And considering everything so far, this prison is being practically a bully to Battu.
I hope this comic soon stops this whole thing of picking on Battu, or I'm going to consider unwatching you. I really, really, REALLY detest bulling, and everything about this has been about picking on and framing Battu for literally everything.

Woah dude chill out this comic is just trying to explain on how Battu handles the situation and obviously GillPanda herself will have a solution and maybe a few plot-twists to better pad out the progression of the story~

And this comic obviously includes drama make it dramatic so that it is interesting instead of being predictable and bland...

I get that that's the angle here. Does that make it okay with me? No. Everyone has the right to a fair trail.
Unless of course the planet Battu got imprisoned on doesn't have that system. At that point, I could understand her getting put into a prison a little better.
Still, these people are definatly a lot more corrupt then I'd like. Someone or something is pulling the strings; or you know, their just this way because reasons.
I still don't like the treatment all the same. Bullying is very very bad. Think of the children here.

The wrong way to write a subject such as bullying in a comic like this is to glorify it, and leave the victim - particularly a main character - without any sense of hope, so it becomes little more than torment porn. Trust us; that isn't what we're going to be doing here. There are seven more pages left in this chapter - keep with it to the end and then draw your own conclusions.

What CHILDREN!?! This site is age restricted. And besides dude if you don’t like it then why the hell are you watching it in the first place? I admit this constant corrupt police and prison is really getting annoying but I’m still watching it because I like battu and wanna See her kick ass. Quit complaining or stop reading. Your acting like a child yourself.

Ichthyos? Is that Torpedo’s species?

Yes.

See you on death row, Battu. Don't worry "coward prince" will send flowers.

Sorry Battu, your sashaying booty walk and cute face ain't gonna help ya NOOOOWW....

Please let there be something to interrupt this. Otherwise Battu will not be in even worse trouble.

Maaaaaann when the hell is things gonna go battu’s way?

...

Yeah, okay, not my duck. But this facility apparently isn't accountable to anyone, the guards are all corrupt, and Battu knows what Battu did or not do on account of having been there. This guy is now at the point of sinister mustache-twirling and stealing candy from babies just to prove a point about his lack of morality. I mean, look—he even has a twirlable mustache, and I'll bet he waxes it.

I have a feeling Battu is going to be screwed...

Grrr I hate people like this STRANGLE HIM AND EJECT HIM AND ALL THE REST INTO SPACE BATTU!

Battu, what are the chances that the video will be edited to make it look like you did it?

what are the odds that the hacker guy did something so butta doesnt get sent to the pit?

I really like Battu as a protagonist, she never gives up and doesn't take shit from anybody. I am truly curious as to what happens next cuz I have no clue! 83

This is bound to turn her into a psychopath. Or with a nastier mind set, and joining a gang. due to going to have nothing left to lose.

Man, dem hips though.

*sees the warden*
Oh no; he's hot!

By the way, is that a RockMan CHIP? /joke/

So I would just like to do a deep dive on this comic because I love it.

What the hell happened to the prince and the rival hunter? How exactly did that story lead to this one? The art is phenomenal and sumptuous for the eyes as always, but I feel like the story has some logical flow problems. Like after chapter one was badass adventuring hunter Battu saves a prince from an evil hunter and fights through space, the chapter two I did not see coming was sad prisoner Battu is sad and we're in prison and there's no fairness and it sucks.

At first I was thinking the rival hunter would visit her in prison to taunt her maybe, and she would be trying to escape as quickly as possible in order to get back to the prince, or maybe the prince is under guard and the rival hunter is planning a heist, and Battu must escape the prison and stop him before he gets the prince and leaves the planet! But instead literally the only thing chapter 2 has in common with chapter 1 is that Battu is in it, no continuation of the previous story at all, and I'm not sure why? Should I give up hope of finding out if the prince ever gets to live in peace?

Also, was Battu thrown in here without a trial? Or was there a trial offscreen that was skipped? I'm not sure how long Battu has been here, but I think that prince is very dead by now.

And do they know who she is? Or do they just know her as the evil prince kidnapper? They are singling her out for bad treatment, but why would they not just have her killed if they're this corrupt? She's allegedly in here because she was mistaken for the prince's kidnapper, but the events of the previous chapter haven't been so much as mentioned. Also there's backstory and world building and a shadowy shapeshifter and Battu is magic I guess? You've got a very wide net here! I guess that's the problem with short webcomics written by very ambitious people! I'm not saying it's bad at all, it's really good! I just remember your previous effort like this, world of affinity, which built a world and a conflict really well and had some foreshadowing to it, but you didn't really finish the story. I don't know how long you plan on this being, and I love love love worldbuilding, but perhaps a more focused narrative would be better?

Still, Battu is an amazing protagonist and I hope you can do great things with her, and I can't wait for more pages!!

We do have a brief episode planned that links the first chapter and the prison arc; it's called 'The Memory Cheats', it'll probably be used as a bonus story for the first print volume to begin with, and it won't actually have Battu in it. In a nutshell, yes; the prince could easily weigh in, give his side of the story and rescue Battu from the predicament she's in...

...if he was actually *allowed* to. It'll also give more of an idea of what prompted him to run away in the first place.

Fair enough. I just thought, has she learned nothing from world of affinity? That one did a lot of worldbuilding and groundwork, and didn't last long enough to make much use of it, so a tighter,, more focused narrative might be best. Now we've spent about a chapter total on worldbuilding and backstory, and every page is extremely valuable in a medium like this, so it had better last quite a while to make use of it!

It should, I've already outlined how.

http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/8499731/

that's the arrogant face of an asshole who prepared fake evidence from the start -_-

I don't think a story has made me really mad from injustice before... it's just one injustice after the other...

inb4 incrimating evidence