Ice Breaker Page 7
So gather 'round, furry children, and let Auntie Weedurrr tell you about the SECOND time she went to the nuthouse. That's right. Second time. So, while there, there was ABSOLUTE DICK to do, so Auntie Weedurrr aggravated the jailers and overseers there until they gave her an offering of typing paper and a single tiny golf pencil and a rubber band (to erase with, because, yanno, apparently I could kill and or hurt myself with a decent...eraser?). Anyway, with the suggestions of some fellow whackos who happen to be nerds at the nuthouse, this comic is what happened. Enjoy.
As for the comic itself, it may or may not be fanon in the end. I dunno. Don't look at me like that, you people act like I actually plan this shit out.
As for the comic itself, it may or may not be fanon in the end. I dunno. Don't look at me like that, you people act like I actually plan this shit out.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 931px
File Size 661.8 kB
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I hope to ascend to this level of talent one day *le sigh* https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ILBAIpmJ_Zk
Well, good pacing, good posing. Decent comic. I think where you might need to look at is shot progressions (Establishing shots and shots through the scene), the axis line, and backgrounds, but you have a very solid foundation, as always. (Says the huy who used to work in comics and went broke there in the early 90's).
The only reason t buy Marvel comics is to observe what not to do. Granted, they have a new line editor, but it will take them a few months for the product to hit the shelves, like 4 months or so.
If ya wanna git gud, I would suggest reading any of the books by Scott McCloud (Understanding Comics, Making Comics, Ect.), but also since I am a firm beliver that the best dramatic comics follow the design of "movies on Paper", books on screen writing, and Cinematography help. Especially cinematography, because that gives you a consistent visual vocabulary and ready supply of symbols to whip out when you need them.This also helps im maintaining a clear, smooth , and efficient storytelling, (Something that fans of Manwha Romances abhorr apparently).
Even with that, I am always abvailable for anyquestions or advice you may need/want in regards to comics should you choose that. Hope this helps.
If ya wanna git gud, I would suggest reading any of the books by Scott McCloud (Understanding Comics, Making Comics, Ect.), but also since I am a firm beliver that the best dramatic comics follow the design of "movies on Paper", books on screen writing, and Cinematography help. Especially cinematography, because that gives you a consistent visual vocabulary and ready supply of symbols to whip out when you need them.This also helps im maintaining a clear, smooth , and efficient storytelling, (Something that fans of Manwha Romances abhorr apparently).
Even with that, I am always abvailable for anyquestions or advice you may need/want in regards to comics should you choose that. Hope this helps.
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