I don't see any option to download. Is it workable to do so? I have found that online there tends to be lag issues that can cause problems, especially when the lag is sometimes long enough to boot you out for "inactivity".

I apologize for the inconvenience with connectivity. Unfortunately, there is no option to download the game via the website, so I may have to use a drop box. For now, you are going to have to play it online until I can get a solution.

I'm liking this so far

Thank you! I promise you there is so much more to come! With what I have planned, this is probably only 10-15% of what the entire thing's going to be!

Well I'm even more excited now

the story and writing overall is "sanitized" to the point where it feels very preachy. now i know that its supposed to be nonfatal vore focused and all but that doesn't mean it has to cut out every adult concept. My biggest issue with this is definitely Grant/Jaws and the casino setting in general. The first thing your character sees when they walk into the casino is that the naga is gambling and that the gator and lizard are drinking root beer. now how would your character know exactly what theyre drinking? they dont even offer you a drink or anything when you walk over. you have the naga gambling but you can't have the gator and lizard drinking actual alcohol? apparently gambling isnt adult but drinking alcohol is. if you've ever been to a real casino neither of them would be drinking root beer. the "friendly manner" line at the very end of jaws vore scene feels out of place. "he softly rubs your head" would be much more interesting to read and gets your point across without just flatly saying so. show don't tell. outside of the female naga it really feels like there lacks character interaction.

overall i feel like its going to be a painfully average vore game with underwhelming writing.

the female naga is fairly buggy

I can't (go-to:) the passage 'Slow vore massage feet first' because it doesn't exist.►


The (if:) command should be assigned to a variable or attached to a hook.►[You slept inside Jasmine for about an hour. She eventually had to release you, and so you woke up on the massage table.The (else:) command should be assigned to a variable or attached to a hook.►["I hope you're

looks like you put the brackets backwards

Thank you very much for all that feedback and I'll put it to good use. My plan is once I put everything together like a shoddy puzzle, I go through and clean everything, all the bugs and fix the grammar and writing. My goal right now is to have at least most of the passages placed.

The game bugs with the female naga and gator post-vore (as wolfkiller25 stated) after clicking an option and having the game stuck with no option to continue.

Aside from technical issues, the scene with female naga felt great....at least for me. I mean the consensual options offered by her were neat. (On a side note, is it a bug if the female naga is offering to eat the player even if his band was set to none?)

Oh and I may have only read the general settings of uprora (only general info, no chapters yet) and was kinda hoping instances where the player avoids getting caught by preds for whatever reason (could be a competition between preys, could be a minotaur's maze, etc), but it's your game so you get to decide.

Thank you for the feedback. Just to let you know I have the naga scene bug fixed, I simply have yet to upload the new version. No, it is not a bug when the naga asks the player if he/she wants a vore massage regardless of what the band says. Remember, you have the option to refuse. The band effects dialogue, and the activation of certain events. For example, let's say someone in the hotel straight up eats you, that can't happen if your band is off. Also, that game instance is fun, and I thought about making another game in the future that focuses on escape. There will be instances where the player can go into the wilderness and encounter predators, whether they choose to meet or avoid them. In other words, the game has multiple branches.

i look forward to the development of this in the future. i dont believe i can criticized any more than what been said above.

Thank you!

id be interested in using my walrus character in this adventure,

refs:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19735979/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19784321/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19517672/

visual
he is a large warlus with gray bushy eyebrows and a stylish mustache. his leather jacket appears small as his belly bulges out much farther as if he isnt able to zip it up. He is drinking at the bar and winks as he notices me and tilts his head as he beckons me to go sit by him.

scenario- i dont know if you do actual beer, but he could be a predator who really only eats when is kinda buzzed or drunk. if not, the root beer is fine, just like with the gator and lizard,

he could also be seen getting a massage, perhaps you could sneak in and rub his belly then that'd proceed to him eating you. then your inside his belly while its being massaged. perhaps the walrus also chooses vore massage. vorception?

id also like to take interest in doing art for this. dont know what kinda quaility you are looking for as i only do traditional.

http://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/.....-parrot-masta/

feel free to check out my gallery, im pretty good with most species, vore included.

I'll see what I can do, but walruses aren't my thing. Still, I will try.

thanks

I love non-fatal vore. This game is really great and even if there isn't much for the moment I can't wait to see the future of this game!

I'm glad to hear you're excited. I haven't been able to put much time into it recently, hardly at all in fact, but I'll soon be able to put more time into it!

I enjoyed the naga scene with Jasmine but otherwise i agree with the above criticism despite the fact I feel it could be easily misunderstood. As they say the devil is in the details.

One concern I'd like to express is that I understand it'll mostly if not all be Non-Fatal. I have no personal problem with this but will it all be willing on both parties? Or will it have unwilling, endo, or imprisonment scenes as well? I completely understand having your prefered interests, but too often I find that Non-Fatal seems to have a habit of being very lack luster in having a believable and engaging scenario. All too often does the prey instantly ( or with very little convincing needed ) trusts the predator with their life that they just met. And once they are in the belly of the beast they have a small conversation to build their characters with no fear of digestion or second guessing their choice, very little action from either party like teasing/belly play/movement for the predator like walking, running, flying, or swimming and for the prey very little details to the inside to the stomach/what it feels like in there/the feeling of the movement the predator makes and how it affects the stomach/or even no struggling and rubbing of any kind before both the prey and pred fall asleep and just appear outside with the predator patiently waiting on them to awake.

It's hard to know whether what I just stated is me gripping about my personal preference or if its truly a issue because so many do it. But either way I'll be watching to see how this develops and hope there is a little more variety when you get more work done.

Otherwise I enjoyed what I saw and look forward to future updates.

Thank you for the critique!

Yes there will be unwilling, and A LOT of it, but only in the wild areas or if your prey band is on. (There will be random events to make things interesting.) Most of the unwilling will be minor imprisonment. Might add some kind of Stockholm Syndrome feature in some areas. I will add a lot more details, but my goal right now is to get most of the passages in, then I go through and make everything richer. So basically, I want to work on the skeleton first, before moving onto making every detailed description.

I plan for the goal of the game to try to get as much done as possible during your day, and making as many relationships to get different endings. If you're not careful, you can lose time and that will hamper your ability to get the ending you want.

One last thing: the text adventure takes place in my Uprora setting, and thereby I have to keep it that way. I am running out of ideas for predators though, and that's why I'm taking requests.

And thank you for the response. I'm glad to hear there will be some variety and thus I'm looking forward to the future with this interaction.

So to your comment about the goal would it be safe to assume that betting against the naga and then trying to run is more or less a Game Over?

Either way i understand this is more of a outline so i do hope i didn't come off as super negative. More just interested in the scenario and wanted to know if it was for me. And I wish i could make a request but alas I don't have that well of a defined character yet. Regardless I shall keep notes and look forward to any updates. Take Care.

Cerby9TheDrake, I DEFINITELY want to see THESE kind of scenes in future. The lack in safe-vore stories are these kind of situations. Entrapment, teasing, maybe a bit of humiliation (like being a belly pet, etc), moving around inside predator's belly, being as casual as it's goes, etc, etc.

I hope there'll be a lot of these in future uptades.

I love this story

Can you make a return button? For being a WIP, there's a lot of dead-ends and to choose the previous choices, you have to start over again.

Good idea, I'll do that whenever I do get back to this.

How about adding my two dinosaur OC's?

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29789371/
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29790275/

These two offer hotel guests a prehistoric style jungle tour. Ihuicati the Brachiosaurus is a real sweetie, but Chimali the Triceratops is a little gruff and tough due to his kind's nature, but has a heart nonetheless. They personally love to tell dinosaur style stories and even do Dinosaurian Language Classes. 'Dinosaurian being the language spoken by dinosaurs until english came along' But they love the chance to show them their insides as well. And are hoping to find more of their dinosaur friends soon.

So? What do you think?

If I ever get back into working on this, I'll seriously consider hiring those two. It really helps that you've given me both a personality overview and a suggested role.

Thx!

I forgot to mention, Dinosaurian is similar to Sinhala.

This is soooo awesome. I wish that you will finish this project so I can see more possibility with Jasmine and Jake, my 2 favorite characters of this story. Good luke !

would honestly loved to see this finished.

It’s sorta impossible at this point because I just can’t connect everything together

yeah i kinda gathered its been awhile it seems well hope you get many more awesome thing going in the future ^^

Some day I will! It will be much more planned and organized!

I feel like that it is discontinued by now unless you just forgot or maybe it’s something else

I really liked this game is excellent.... But I think there's little possibility there yet... Also, as I see it was 4 years ago... I'm guessing the "project" canceled?