
Battu's Log (Random comic strip)
I wanted to finish this yesterday! I was crunching away but I have been pulled away so many fucking times to go places or help with something uuuugh!! But I'm glad it's done, and I hope you guys enjoy this quick little comic!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Alien (Other)
Size 1064 x 9604px
File Size 5.65 MB
This is Gill's first experiment with that turn of phrasing. While I'm doing the book edits and revising the text, we're talking over how best to apply it and continue with new chapters as I write them. It'll definitely be toned down a bit - we don't want to be accused of ripping off Games Workshop - and it would also get very old very fast to have the main character talk constantly like a comedy sidekick in a way that breaks up the flow of the conversation. We're gearing towards a distinctive medium of its own where pronouns can be removed after dialogue tweaks make them less necessary, so that doing so doesn't make it read clumsy and wrong rather than idiosyncratic; and word duplication is done instead with hyphenated synonyms used more intelligently on Battu's part.
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