This project is on indefinite hiatus, and is just being shared for the sake of sharing it.

Skye’s Commentary:

This is one of the bigger problem areas of the comic, mostly because neither Jo nor I thought to create a floor plan so things begin to move around in relation to the characters. It doesn’t look too bad yet, but I think it becomes more clear later.

However I really like the angle Jo went with in panel one. And you start to see some of his notes on how he wanted to change things around. Making the space seem more claustrophobic, making the light from behind narrower to show that the door is closing behind him, and so forth.

 jotunneko’s Commentary:

Oh man, the apartment, haha. Skye isn't kidding. It didn't take us terribly long to realize we needed to have a floorplan or /something/. Some way to keep a clear overview of who's where, and doing what. An environment can be as crystal clear in your head as you'd like, but without an anchor it's too easy to drift off.. Anyway. I really like the way Tommy looks in that third cell.

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