Korsun Backstory Lore: Mentor and Apprentice Pt4
Finally got around to the end of the story here, this time its focused more on kinda building up to a final conflict and giving the two main characters a decisive end.
I ended up going back and forth a bit on the end, shifting the tone and mood of it back and forth a few times; let me know if you guys think this was a good ending or if it left something to be desired, if so please elaborate on how it could have been better of if it left you disappointed.
Regardless this will be the not only the last part of this story but a fitting introduction to one of the main characters to help my followers understand why they are the way they are.
Let me know what you guys think in the comments, thanks everyone, hope you enjoy the last part here!
I ended up going back and forth a bit on the end, shifting the tone and mood of it back and forth a few times; let me know if you guys think this was a good ending or if it left something to be desired, if so please elaborate on how it could have been better of if it left you disappointed.
Regardless this will be the not only the last part of this story but a fitting introduction to one of the main characters to help my followers understand why they are the way they are.
Let me know what you guys think in the comments, thanks everyone, hope you enjoy the last part here!
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Awesome, I appreciate that. I might consider that sometime, thought right now I'm still kinda working on my process here, once I've kinda made my story writing process more consistent I might ask for feedback before posting it, for now though its still a bit too experimental I think.
Anyway, see you next time.
Anyway, see you next time.
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