I decided to put a little bit more work into that picture, and see how I'd do with Photoshop. I pretty much redrew everything in sections, then colored it in a similar manner. This also allowed me to experiment with positioning, as you can tell.

I am *extremely* pleased with how much better this is now. With a little bit of digital work, where were so many little things that I was able to fix! I almost fell prey to the trap of working a project over so much until you simply screw it up by working too much on it.

Anyways, hope you enjoy!