
ᴅᴇᴠɪᴀɴᴛᴀʀᴛ ∙ ᴛᴡɪᴛᴛᴇʀ ∙ ᴘɪᴄᴀʀᴛᴏ ∙ ᴛᴡɪᴛᴄʜ
ᴅɪꜱᴄᴏʀᴅ ꜱᴇʀᴠᴇʀ ∙ ᴛᴇʟᴇɢʀᴀᴍ ᴄʜᴀɴɴᴇʟ
Sand surfing Cricket is up to another journey. Commission done for fek. Hope he'll find lots of treasure!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 853 x 1280px
File Size 1.51 MB
If you're looking for a way to strengthen this further, it'd be to work a little more line weight in (for example, the silhouette of the left leg at the back of the upper thigh gets really indistinct) but that's me praising through faint damnation. I really admire how -clear- this image is; it suits the crisp, bright lighting that would be natural to a scene like this.
The image is long since done, so freely disregard, but other spots that I notice: Although speaking of lighting, what is casting the shadow across his chest? The front of the capelet? Presuming the wind resistance would play with the garment and assuming no eddies, it'd be more flattened to his chest, thus reducing that shadow to little more than a small outlining given the overhead light. Likewise the feather tied to his left forearm casts no shadow, though given it's positioning it's arguable the only shadow it would cast would be a very thin line at the attachment string anyway. It would be nice to have a bit more happening in the background than just vague dunes, but the composition is strong enough that it keeps the eye on the central figure anyway, so this might be to cross purposes.
Anyway: I'm splitting hairs. It's a great image, and I'm naming it Contender #6 for this year's Best Anthropomorphic Artwork Awards. :)
The image is long since done, so freely disregard, but other spots that I notice: Although speaking of lighting, what is casting the shadow across his chest? The front of the capelet? Presuming the wind resistance would play with the garment and assuming no eddies, it'd be more flattened to his chest, thus reducing that shadow to little more than a small outlining given the overhead light. Likewise the feather tied to his left forearm casts no shadow, though given it's positioning it's arguable the only shadow it would cast would be a very thin line at the attachment string anyway. It would be nice to have a bit more happening in the background than just vague dunes, but the composition is strong enough that it keeps the eye on the central figure anyway, so this might be to cross purposes.
Anyway: I'm splitting hairs. It's a great image, and I'm naming it Contender #6 for this year's Best Anthropomorphic Artwork Awards. :)
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