*Hugs* I'm sorry to hear that

its okay, i found da cure for ded dog, its called, get another one asap

heh, I suppose so

ya know that story i wasn't gonna post, well idid, kinda. I wound up deleting the original and sumed everything, paraphrased, into a short about my life as of 5 years ago.

Ya I read it, I figured you shortened it. IMHO if you'd left it longer it would have been a bit easier to follow. When its shorter it seems like you're rushing through it. Wrapping up 5 years of information in one or two paragraphs isn't the best way to get across what you want too. I would take at least a paragraph for each, unless a couple of them were uneventful in which case you can compress that as well.

Sorry to leave this on this submission

thats okay, i had to take care of a few things. so i was offline for a couple of hours.